Livin la Vida Loca (Schmoop Bingo 13/27)

Jan 28, 2011 05:51

Title: Livin' La Vida Loca
Author: secondplatypus
Pairing: Bobby/Crowley (pre-slash)
Rating: mild PG-13 for mentions of drunkenness and a bit of bad language
Warnings: light schmoop and a smidgeon of language
Word Count: 1063
Disclaimer: Not mine. Didn't happen.

Summary: In the middle of an ass-cold South Dakota winter, Bobby wakes up on a tropical island ( Read more... )

bobby is having none of this bullshit, genre: schmoop, crowley is a smooth bastard, fanfiction, supernatural, schmoop bingo, rating: pg-13, pairing: bobby/crowley

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morganoconner January 28 2011, 14:54:22 UTC
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

I was so excited to get your message, and this didn't disappoint AT ALL. Your Bobby and Crowley voices are perfect!! I don't know what it is about that particular pairing I find so adorable, but whatever it is, you captured it brilliantly, because I ADORED this. Also, the idea of a warm, decadent beach vacation while I'm slogging through snow piled so high I can barely see my neighbor's house across the street? SO NECESSARY TO MY LIFE RIGHT NOW.

And an update to this 'verse just made a really crappy morning about ten thousand times better, so THANK YOU SO MUCH BB!!! It was also a really good excuse to go back and re-read the rest of the 'verse. *GRIN*

♥ you lots sweetie!!!

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secondplatypus February 22 2011, 14:18:38 UTC
It's such a relief to hear that I did this pairing justice, and it always makes me so happy to know that you're enjoying your schmoops.
This 'verse is written for the express purpose of making people smile, and I love being able to make someone's day better.

I've been warming to Crowley over the last little while, and I was nervous as all get-out about writing him.

I want a warm, decadent beach vacation, ysplzkthx!
I haven't been to anywhere tropical in so long, and I needed to live vicariously through Bobby and Crowley. California may be sunny and warm, but it doesn't hold a candle to the South Pacific.

There is so much love for you, miss Morgan. <3

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ladyeternal January 28 2011, 15:31:34 UTC
MEGGY-FIC! MEGGY-FIC! ::BOUNCES EXCITEDLY:: OMIGOD, SWEETIE, I'VE MISSED YOU!!!!!!

This is such a GORGEOUS addition to your schmoop 'verse, I can't even begin. Bobby is beautifully bristly and Crowley is gorgeously snarky in those exquisite cultured tones and I just love every moment of this. Especially the way you phrased this:

"The South Pacific. Northeast corner of the Vanuatu archipelago, if you want to bother with the details."

Bobby bit back the threats of grievous bodily harm and/or death unless he was immediately returned home that sprang to his lips, settling on the only civil response he could think of. "Why?"

"You need a break from that desolate arctic wasteland, to say nothing of the brothers Winchester and their angelic catamites."

Absolutely SLAYED me with this.

I don't care how long it takes for the sequel or anything else, Meggy-love. I'm ecstatic at any sign that you're well. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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secondplatypus February 22 2011, 14:21:02 UTC
I'VE MISSED YOU, TOOOOOOOOOOO
I just wrote my first actual porn in months, and I'm so excited about the idea of being able to write again.
Having the use of my hands back is wonderful in ways I really can't describe. :)

I was incredibly nervous about whether or not I'd be able to pull off this pairing, and it makes me so happy that you liked my Bobby and my Crowley. They're two of my favorite characters, and it does me good to know that I can do them justice.

Those lines you quoted were the first completed dialogue for this whole fic. :)
Love you dearly, lady!

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sarahlizzie January 28 2011, 16:05:23 UTC
Oh, honey, it's so fantastic to see that you're well enough to write again. <3<3<3
These two are beyond cute, and I think you captured their chemistry perfectly.
Also I think I speak for all of us when I say I'm glad I wasn't there to see Bobby running around in his underwear. ;)
Glad you're feeling better hun <3

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secondplatypus February 22 2011, 14:31:26 UTC
It's so good to be well enough to write again, and that's such a wonderful compliment.
*snuggles you*

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secondplatypus February 22 2011, 14:33:14 UTC
Being paid in hugs sounds like a pretty sweet deal to me!

I love this pairing, I really, really do, and I'm sad there isn't much fic written for them.
I really enjoyed exploring the caring side of Crowley's nature, and I'm so glad it worked for you.

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. <3333
There will definitely be more Bobby/Crowley chapters to come

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secondplatypus February 22 2011, 14:33:59 UTC
Just knowing that you enjoyed this and that it cheered you up is squee-worthy feedback enough for me, darling.
You flatter me. <3

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