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secondplatypus

Sweet Surprise (Dean/Gabriel)

Oct 01, 2010 05:49

Title: Sweet Surprise
Pairing: Dean/Gabriel
Rating: R
Warnings: Gratuitous descriptions of Dean's sex-tacular lips, Gabriel's dubious morality (read: minor consent issues), crack, oral sex, and a healthy dose of Sam-trauma.
Spoilers: 2.15, 3.11, and 5.08; set at an unspecified time shortly after the latter.
Word Count: 1686
Disclaimer: ( Read more... )

kink: first time, kink: lip!porn (dean), fanfiction, supernatural, kink: oral sex, pairing: dean/gabriel, kink: pie, rating: r, pairing: dean/pie

Comments 18

sweetsyren October 1 2010, 13:02:39 UTC

BWAHAHAHAHA!

lol That was hot and hilarious!

secondplatypus October 3 2010, 09:23:34 UTC

*giggles*
Thank you so much, sweetie. I snerked somewhere close to a billion times when I was writing it. Humor and crack don't always work for me, but every now and again the stars align and something like this pops out, followed shortly by me doubting my sanity. I'm so happy you liked it.

sevenbee October 1 2010, 13:16:15 UTC

Haha, love it!

secondplatypus October 3 2010, 09:23:45 UTC

Thanks, darling!

jenab October 1 2010, 13:35:55 UTC

*grins* Poor Dean.

secondplatypus October 3 2010, 09:25:03 UTC

My love for tormenting him borders on pathological, but I just can't help myself.

darkamber October 1 2010, 14:20:27 UTC

Hilarious! Thus Sam got the confirmation that Dean really, really loved pie!

One second, Dean was enjoying his pie, the next, the delicious flaky goodness was replaced by a mouthful of green jacket;
This image had me gigglesnort in a not very flattering way.

secondplatypus October 3 2010, 09:26:31 UTC

Poor Dean. Poor, poor, poor Dean.
I've put him through so much. The mental picture I get when I read over the last two paragraphs makes me snark every time I look at it.

I'm glad I could make you laugh/gigglesnort; unflattering giggles are the best giggles!

wornoutbirks October 1 2010, 14:30:05 UTC

OK. This was really, really hot.

And also really, really funny.

Did I mention hot? Yeah...I can't wait for the rest of these. Morgan did a damn good job with prompts and you did a damn fine job writing them. <3

secondplatypus October 3 2010, 09:28:06 UTC

Thank you so, so much; this comment made me grin like crazy.

Morgan is fantastic in general, and I adore her for giving me Dean/Gabriel to play with. Dean/Gabriel comes in three flavors in my head: cracky, prank-battle-antagonistic-y, and serious, and I've decided to write one of each. I hope you enjoy the others as much as you did this one.