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Fire and Ice (Perish Twice 4/5)

Jul 10, 2010 04:43

Title: Fire and Ice (4/5)
Author: secondplatypus
Pairing: Sam/Lucifer
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: angst, wing kink, explicit sex, rough sex, tender sex, marking, biting, some D/S and S/M themes, a little language, and the evillest cliff-hanger I've ever written
Spoilers: none
Word Count: 2141 (6819 total)
Disclaimer: Supernatural and all characters therein are the ( Read more... )

series: perish twice, kink: biting, kink: marking, pairing: sam/lucifer, rating: nc-17, fanfiction, kink: bdsm, supernatural, kink: bottom!sammy, kink: wings

Comments 19

highermagic July 10 2010, 12:15:00 UTC

.....SHIT!

That was such a hawt/evil chapter! Ohmygod!!! Must... Read...again for hotness and shock value.

SHIT! Sam said yes!!

You are a beautifully evil mastermind. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

*is still in shock*
seriously. Fic babies. NOW xD

*epic love*

secondplatypus July 10 2010, 12:26:11 UTC

I was sitting here all anxiously when you dropped this gloriously validating, exactly-what-I-was-hoping for comment right in my lap. I owe you so many cookies.

*cackles*
I haven't indulged my evil streak in a while. I wasn't sure how this would go over, if it would be too much or just enough, and then I realized that for us Sam/Lucifer shippers, the concept of "too much" doesn't really exist.
I was going to wait to post this until I had chapter 5 written to minimize the cliff-hanger factor, but my nefarious genius of a go-to beta and best friend told me to do it now.

And yea, the plague of fic babies did spread across the land, and there was darkness and porn as far as the eye could see!
If there'd been an eleventh Biblical plague, I think our evil slash babies would have fit the bill beautifully.

*smishes you*

ladyeternal July 10 2010, 12:58:43 UTC

:::PLACEHOLDER:::

THIS SPACE IS RESERVED FOR AN ACTUAL COMMENT, WHICH WILL BE PROVIDED WHEN BRAIN RECONSTRUCTS ITSELF FROM THE MELTED SLAG TO WHICH THIS INSANELY HAWT PR0N HAS REDUCED IT.

COMMENTOR WILL BE IN BUNK UNTIL THAT OCCURS.

secondplatypus July 16 2010, 08:25:00 UTC

NO ACTUAL COMMENT IS REQUIRED - THE KNOWLEDGE THAT YOUR BRAIN HAS BEEN REDUCED TO A QUIVERING LUMP OF GUH IS MORE THAN ENOUGH FOR ME.
I AM IMMENSELY GLAD TO HEAR THAT YOU LIKED THIS SO MUCH.
ENJOY YOUR TIME IN THE BUNK.

falling_dominos July 10 2010, 14:36:33 UTC

Oh yes yes yes! Indeed I love this series.

But poor Sammy got good love from the Devil, said yes, and now who knows where that goes? There? Yes...that goes there. Lol!

But onto real comments, I adored hot pronz of course. Though I will admit I liked Forceful!Luci there at the beginning, it showed how uncomfortable Lucifer actually is with the idea of loving a human, since humans got him booted in the first place.

And love causes loss of sanity, everyone knows that.

Oh and the visual of Luci's wings was awesome, showing the meaning of 'Morningstar' ::nods::

Okay...back to previously scheduled flailing in 5,4,3,2,1....

::flails around in house::

secondplatypus July 16 2010, 08:28:16 UTC

*shifty eyes*
I know where it goes. Ohyes, I do. and there is most definitely one of its many destinations.

I love writing forceful!Luci. He's just so delicious.
Sadly, in the interest of character development and plot whatnot, I couldn't have him BAMF!domming Sam this time around. *sadface*.
Stupid plot, getting in the way of my pornz.

The image of Lucifer's wings was actually my favorite detail in this story, and I'm so glad it stood out to you.

I'm glad to make you flail again, my darling.

morganoconner July 10 2010, 14:43:15 UTC

BRAIN...

DEAD.

HOLY FUCK.

secondplatypus July 16 2010, 08:29:07 UTC

*smishes*

Shall I ask Chuck!God to bring it back to life?

aeon_entwined July 10 2010, 17:58:39 UTC

Fffffft. *rolls around and makes a few incoherent dolphin noises or something*

WAY TO GO, SAMMY. YOU'VE JUST ABOUT ENDED THE WORLD. AGAIN.

Well, at least he's getting fantastic sex while he's at it, eh? ;)

Holy Archangel, Batman. This is hot. You kind of hit a lot of my kinks in here ... <.< ... so yeah. I'm still kind of rolling around and making incoherent noises. *loves on*

secondplatypus July 16 2010, 08:49:48 UTC

Yaaaaaaaaay, dolphin noises!

Sam really needs to be more careful about his choices in who he has the sex with - but then again, were he pragmatic and not a derf-derf in this regard, his willingness to make dumb decisions regarding his dick wouldn't be canon and this wouldn't be nearly as plausible. :)

I'm so glad you found this so hot - I kindasorta indulged a number of my kinky bastard kinks of kink here, and it's good to know that delightfully pervy minds think alike. *grins*

Now all I have to do is make more headway on the next chapter. 's like pulling teeth. *puts on a brave face and slogs on*