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second_batgirl

Fic: Change That Severs Me

Jul 08, 2010 13:56

Title: Change That Severs Me
Rating: PG-13 (drinking)
Summary: The first time Adam had a drink was approximately an hour after he had handed the Turbo powers over to Carlos.
Word Count: ~600
Pairing: Gen (Adam/Rocky if you're looking for it)
Disclaimer: Power Rangers belongs to Saban!
Continuity: Passing the Torch
Challenge/Prompt/Warning: hc_bingo - ( Read more... )

fic: power rangers, challenge: hc bingo, fic: all

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second_batgirl July 8 2010, 20:44:00 UTC

He needs so many hugs!

Thank you so much. :D

khandreia July 8 2010, 20:46:09 UTC

In the hands of most writers, I probably would have passed something like this off as out-of-character. But because you delved deeper and really showed the hurting and how Adam knew what he was doing wasn't right/normal, it actually works. Well done! I just want to give him a great big hug at the end of this.

second_batgirl July 9 2010, 00:56:01 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you think I did a good job showing how badly he was hurting - that means a lot. (Adam seriously needs the hugs!)

pairatime July 8 2010, 20:49:21 UTC

great fic and I like how you used alcohol realistically and the power loss just well done

second_batgirl July 9 2010, 00:56:23 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it!

pairatime July 9 2010, 01:01:42 UTC

I did

rivulet027 July 8 2010, 20:50:54 UTC

That was sad. So glad Aisha and Rocky have things under control. Poor Adam and the rest of them.

second_batgirl July 9 2010, 00:56:54 UTC

They all really need hugs. At least they have their friends to take care of them! (lielabell is writing what happened to the other Rangers!)

ficwize July 8 2010, 21:56:15 UTC

I really loved the colors bit at the end. That was powerfully done.

second_batgirl July 9 2010, 00:57:21 UTC

Thank you! ♥ ♥ ♥