Very positive start; Roy assessing the situation makes it more vbelievable, and I was quite worried for the poor Havoc Chimera. Roy might have more of a painful or horified reaction at the thought of killing his friend.
Well I am not sure that Tucker was ever a friend, just a colleague as far as we know, and the fact of what he was doing, and what he did to Havoc, I doubt he would feel that badly. At least, I think you mean Tucker.
But thank you for responding. I was beginning to think that no one was reading this. I will post part 2 either tonight or tomorrow.
In the last paragraph, Roy was considering putting Havoc out of his misery; I think his thoughts on that idea would be even more painful than what was written. BTW, I was wondering who turned havoc into a Chimera, since you mentioned Tucker's death.
Oh... sorry. Yes, it was Tucker that turned him into a chimera.
I didn't really think about putting too much into that paragraph, because it was supposed to be more about Havoc, but Roy does talk about it a tiny but more at the beginning of the next chapter. :)
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At least, I think you mean Tucker.
But thank you for responding. I was beginning to think that no one was reading this. I will post part 2 either tonight or tomorrow.
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I didn't really think about putting too much into that paragraph, because it was supposed to be more about Havoc, but Roy does talk about it a tiny but more at the beginning of the next chapter. :)
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