This is just so beautiful and touching - I could barely keep back tears at thend. Great job with the whole story arc. I wonder, though, is this the last chapter for this arc? And if so, will there be a spin-off of some sort?
Honestly, I am not sure if it will continue. It seemed like a good place to stop, but it was very fun to write and I wouldnt mind continuing if people want me to. But I am not sure where I would go. I may need a plot bunny *hint hint* :)
Hmm. Well, you could always set something up after they've finished their 6 month training. Maybe they have a tiny, tiny break before they leave for Ishbal or something...? I don't know. Just kind of throwing out an idea. Maybe something more will come to me later. ^^;
I was thinking that, although I would prolly do one chapter for the first time they meet during thier training, that few days of leave they have after a month of training, then the chapter after that would be after the 6 months were over.. that is what I have been mulling over for a while. If I did continue after that, it would be during Ishbal, but writing about that scares me. It will be angsty and sad I am sure. :)
Hm.. I know I should go back to it.. but the problem is that I am really not sure where I should go..
If you want to do me a huge favor, you can read my "After the Fall" series, and perhaps give me pointers on where I might could take the story? It is at a standstill for right now.
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If I did continue after that, it would be during Ishbal, but writing about that scares me. It will be angsty and sad I am sure. :)
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(I have a problem.. I have 3 arcs right now that I have going, and I am not sure which to work on and when! )
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If you want to do me a huge favor, you can read my "After the Fall" series, and perhaps give me pointers on where I might could take the story? It is at a standstill for right now.
http://seaweed-fma.livejournal.com/6590.html (has a link to all 7 chapters so far... )
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