I Once was Blind, But Now I See (Hawkeye x Alfons) Gift fic

[seaweed_fma]

Title: I Once was Blind, But Now I See
Author: SeaweedOtter
Requestor: inuyashaohimePairing: Hawkeye x Alfons (sorta), implied Hawkeye x Roy, sorta implied Roy x Ed

Comments

[inuyashanohime]

You know, this isn't what I expected, but I really like it--it includes Hawkeye being sent through the gate instead of Alfons coming to the other side to meet her...

And true, this isn't so much about the pairing, but it looks to be the start of something...sort of gives an opening to the start of a relationship, which I like.

And now...*_*

I must either write a continuation to this, or just write something for this pairing in general.

Thank you! Thank you so much!

[seaweed_fma]

I would love to see what you do with this.. If you do write a continuation (and I hope you do) then please let me see it. I have never had anyone take a story of mine and run with it. It would be cool to see.
And I am glad you like it. I just wasn't sure how to get Alfons to Amestris, but it seemed easier to get Hawkeye to Germany. :)

[inuyashanohime]

Dude XD

With the way my brain's taking it, this might become another "Shamballa", or "Remember" (My RoyxHei fic I'm working on)...

I hope it turns out like that. I like the way the idea's forming in my head and it'll be fun writing it. I already have the lines forming in my mind...

I should start writing XD

[space_mutt]

Wow, this is a really cool start, I love the concept. Seriously, one of ya'll continue it, please :)

[seaweed_fma]

I am really hoping that she does.. She can write Alfons so much better than I, really!!!

[shoe_bug]

Very sweet. I definitely wasn't expecting this but it's an interesting idea. On one hand I'd like to see this continued, on the other hand I like it the way it is. Gives it an air of mystery, y'know?

It makes me sad to think what's going to happen to Roy now that Riza is gone though.

[seaweed_fma]

Well, I kinda saw it as a one sided Roy x Riza, like Roy is pining over Ed and doesnt really see what he has (Riza) in front of him, so maybe he wouldnt miss her as much as she would miss him.
But that is just for this story, mind you. I think Roy is more appreciative then we think about having her there. That is why I am excited to see where the manga goes.
And I REALLY want her to continue this fic, so I will keep badgering her about it.. hehe

[shoe_bug]

Now that I notice the 'Roy/Ed' part that you put up near the top, I agree. Ignore what I said before. XD
Badger away. I'll be keeping my eye out for an update.

[grass_angel]

Oooh, very interesting plotwise (I'm a sucker for Gate crossing fics) although the character interaction is interesting too.

[secretfreaky]

This is a fantastic start and hope to read more soon!