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Gains and Losses- Chapter 12: "Movement" (Havoc)

Apr 11, 2007 14:21

This is the twelfth chapter of the arc called "Gains and Losses". It is Havoc-centric. It is set in the mangaverse, so if you don't know what happens to Havoc around Chapter 38, then read it before you start this fic.

Title: Movement
Author: SeaweedOtter
Beta: The winner of "Survivor: Mother" havocmangawipCharacters: Jean Havoc, Maria Ross ( Read more... )

fan fiction, jean havoc, maria ross, multi-chapter fic, havoc x ross, fullmetal alchemist, gains and losses

Comments 7

secretfreaky April 12 2007, 00:25:55 UTC

Fantastic update! I am enjoying this story so much!

binaryalchemist April 12 2007, 00:38:04 UTC

Ohhh...wonderful, wonderful! The more I read it, the more I like the paring...and yeah...lavender DOES seem right for her. Can't wait to see what happens next!

secretfreaky April 12 2007, 02:14:31 UTC

Fantastic update! I am enjoying this story so much!

secretfreaky April 12 2007, 02:16:16 UTC

Um, sorry about the double posting. Glitch with the user...

THANKS FOR THE GREAT CHAPTER/STORY! asm613 April 13 2007, 04:29:10 UTC

Another chapter that started and was filled with promise and good things and feelings; yet ends bittersweet. If only she could have silently observed him from the crack in the door while he "finished" with her name on his lips. And with a smile on her lips; she could have silently retreated; Havoc none the wiser. You like your angst don't you? Very well written. I enjoyed the picnic scene especially and also the moment when Armstrong had to help him into the higher truck. Your writing has such a natural flow. And the way you showed Mustang's loyalty and affection for his subordinates/friends...when the person in charge of the country stops by to help you move...that's cool ( ... )