I like the update. I cannot help you with the plot line, though. Sorry...Maybe Ed can find a way to contact Mustang and they have a little light phone-sex...?
Well, I'm sure you don't have to follow it so strictly... You can follow the story line a little more loosely.. Maybe slight mentions of what happens in the series, and changing it up a bit...
And MORE.. This chapter is tiny!!!!!!
While it is very good, it simply isn't enough... :D
Hell, it probably wouldn't even kill you to drop out of the storyline all together and make it all AU. But that may just be my greedy fgangirl talking.. Then again, if it is so difficult for you to get a plotline out of your own story because of following the series, it may be in the best interest of this story for you to drop it(the storyline, not After the Fall)
((I am keeping to the plot of the anime as much as I can, but it is proving very hard.))
Well if sticking to the plot of the anime is proving very hard and you find yourself with writers block. you must let go of whatever is giving you the block and lack of ideas...so start to go Alternate Universe-ish. An imagination was meant to wander/dream/flourish; so open up your imagination baby and let the words out and write them down. i think we'd all like to read something other than the anime; because we've already seen it.
look forward to reading all the naughty bits and pieces your imagination can come up with. thanks for sharing your story with us.
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And MORE.. This chapter is tiny!!!!!!
While it is very good, it simply isn't enough... :D
Hell, it probably wouldn't even kill you to drop out of the storyline all together and make it all AU. But that may just be my greedy fgangirl talking.. Then again, if it is so difficult for you to get a plotline out of your own story because of following the series, it may be in the best interest of this story for you to drop it(the storyline, not After the Fall)
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((I am keeping to the plot of the anime as much as I can, but it is proving very hard.))
Well if sticking to the plot of the anime is proving very hard and
you find yourself with writers block. you must let go of whatever
is giving you the block and lack of ideas...so start to go Alternate
Universe-ish. An imagination was meant to wander/dream/flourish; so
open up your imagination baby and let the words out and write them down.
i think we'd all like to read something
other than the anime; because we've already seen it.
look forward to reading all the naughty bits and pieces your imagination
can come up with. thanks for sharing your story with us.
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*Drools thinking about it*
-Frenchie
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