Comments | seaweed_fma: The Seed of the Fire- Chapter 12: "Washing of Sins" (Mustang x Hughes)

seaweed_fma

The Seed of the Fire- Chapter 12: "Washing of Sins" (Mustang x Hughes)

Mar 15, 2007 19:12

Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist ( Read more... )

roy mustang, the seed of the fire, fan fiction, maes hughes, multi-chapter fic, fullmetal alchemist, roy x hughes

Comments 4

baxtrice March 16 2007, 00:26:17 UTC

Oh first comment - Yay!

Oh yeah: SO SMEXY!

secretfreaky March 16 2007, 02:17:46 UTC

This is so great, but why do I feel like the last line was a foreshadowing of something bad to happen? I don't mean being shipped off, but could a certain woman be coming between them?...

thincirithiel March 16 2007, 11:27:13 UTC

Haha, I loved the incident with the cold water :D

asm613 April 3 2007, 18:22:07 UTC

this was so sweet, sensitive and heartbreaking. to hear roy call hughes "love" was wow. but when hughes was left alone in the shower after they made love; i got concerned-Hughes repeated Roy's words with some ominous undertone "nothing can get him down"; and then banged his head into the wall. does hughes have news that roy won't like to hear? that might break his heart?