Fic: Still Inside (part 1 of 2)

[fra_apples]

Title: Still Inside
Author: MaggieLaFey
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Fetish, BDSM, violence, sexual situations
Word count: ~10k
Setting: Post-s10 established relationship (no comics knowledge needed)
Summary: Spike and Buffy have been happily together for a couple of years and have been magically locked into a sex store. What to do but have a very porny

Comments

[thenewbuzwuzz]

Giggling about where Buffy's lipstick went. :)

"She was an adult woman, and it was totally fine to get hot when fighting. In fact, it was more than fine! It was her damn right as a slayer."
Yeah! That's the spirit!

"“I had better things to do""
Buffy is doing well at the role-playing :)

"Special Slayer Punishing Division"
Heeee! *g*

I like all the little references to how they planned this out beforehand.

Smiling nonstop at what a good time those crazy kids are having!

Oh, fun :)

Chekhov's Paddle! I did think it might make an appearance. :) And, personally, I like that they aren't going too hard with the slut-shaming. "Bad girl" is a pretty cool title to have, all told.

That was nice! You're good at this. Thanks so much for sharing, especially as it involved defeating LiveJournal in single combat. :) Looking forward to when I have time to read part 2!

[fra_apples]

Aw, I'm so glad you read and enjoyed this, thank you!! I really appreciate it, and love knowing that it made you smile. ❤️

If you liked the way they planned this out, you might like the first chapter I've linked to as well. It's basically them coming up with the idea and talking about it (plus some sexy-times, because I am shameless that way).

I'm actually very perverse and love slutshaming too lol BUT while I think Spike would go crazy with being called Buffy's little slut, it just doesn't fit Buffy. Which is why I went for the bad girl, which I think could work much better as a kink for her (even though I see her mostly as a Dom). I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you again ❤️

[thenewbuzwuzz]

ohh, I thought I had read the first chapter, but I was wrong! That was the prequel that I read.

[fra_apples]

I think I made a mess with things, since this is the second chapter of the second story of a 2-parts series... and this second chapter is divided in two parts itself. Lol.

[double_dutchess]

Oh, I forgot all about the "Bad Girl" paddle! I should have expected that one to be put to good use. I love how Buffy and Spike clearly put some effort in thinking up this whole cheesy but watertight scenario together, designed to be as far removed from actual Slayer-Watcher interaction as possible. I'm sure neither of them wanted Buffy to be thinking of Giles in the heat of the moment :-)

Btw you have a "pussing" somewhere that should be "pussy".

[fra_apples]

You're a saviour, thank you so much for catching that typo! 😬

The original paddle Spike had seen had "whore" on it, but he chose this one for Buffy because she's not as into slut-shaming as Spike would be hehe.
And yeah, Aspasia was the one that recommended some negotiation and I loved going for it--if you're interested in more of that, you can check out the first chapter I linked to. :)
Yeah, I had to make it as far from Giles as I could, since that's definitely not my kink lol.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, dear Duchess ❤️

[double_dutchess]

Oh, that's right about the paddle! I misremembered. I thought it was a paddle he'd seen at the shop, but it was one he remembered seeing once before ... (Yeah, I had to go reread the first story, just for research ;-) I agree "bad girl" is better for Buffy.

And thanks for pointing out that there is a first chapter to this story that actually has them coming up with the scenario; I completely overlooked that!

[fra_apples]

Lol, no worries there, I didn't remember all that precisely either! Glad we agree on the right nickname for Buffy.

You're welcome! I don't know whether it's late already, but I think I'm gonna change the title of this to Still Inside ch.2, so it's clearer haha.

Thank you again ❤️