Fic: "Defeat" (1/1)

Nov 15, 2016 18:51

Defeat

By: caia
Rating: PG
Genre: angst
Length: ficlet
Standard disclaimer: The characters aren't mine, just the story.
Feedback: Please! (N.B.: While I appreciate the sentiment behind heart-clicks, I cannot see them.)

She felt him in the doorway behind her; felt him arrive, lean, move no closer.

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form: fic, rating: other, era: post-series, creator: thisficklemob

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slaymesoftly November 16 2016, 00:01:17 UTC
Oh, that was so good. So them. So her.

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thisficklemob November 16 2016, 00:33:31 UTC
Merci beaucoup.

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rebcake November 16 2016, 01:02:00 UTC
Ah, my heart. You've captured their silent understanding beautifully. Her fear and the way he lets her know she's not helpless, that she has choices, that she's still in charge of her actions. That's a real partner.

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thisficklemob November 16 2016, 21:31:24 UTC
*nods* Thank you. :)

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thenewbuzwuzz November 16 2016, 06:36:32 UTC
I love this! It's so insightful, and it has some of my favorite Spuffy things! (Sharing comfortable silence: yess. Spike knowing how she feels without asking: doubleplusyes. ^^)

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thisficklemob November 16 2016, 21:31:51 UTC
Hee! Thank you, nice person!

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freecat15 November 16 2016, 16:43:06 UTC
Oh, what a wonderful portrait of a beautiful partnership!

'The question, when it came, was strategic.
"Time to run then, Slayer?" '

What better way to show how deep his understanding of her is?
I love this!

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thisficklemob November 16 2016, 21:42:18 UTC
Thank you very much. :)

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thisficklemob November 17 2016, 23:19:16 UTC
Well, shucks. Thanks!

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