DRABBLE : Headless

Jun 25, 2010 01:26


And my final entry for today, a drabble. It doesn't really make sense, but when you're struggling to write anything at all, words is words! Based on the theme for this round - Head v Heart. Hope you enjoy. Thanks again to enigmatic_blue.

DRABBLE - HEADLESS

Heard it said you can live without your heart; they can put you on bypass, give you a pig’s ( Read more... )

form: fic, era: btvs s5, rating: other, creator: spikesdeb

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fangfaceandrea June 25 2010, 03:16:10 UTC
oh painful and twist-y like Spike. Loved it.

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spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:39:47 UTC
Thank you. I see him pacing and smoking and cursing his life. Glad you enjoyed :)

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rebcake June 25 2010, 05:53:00 UTC
Silly author person. It makes perfect sense. Of the sort that hurts like, well, a very painful thing. *loves*

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spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:40:34 UTC
*blushes* Thanks bunches; I just kept reading it and it sounded odd - but odd is good! Glad you enjoyed.

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readerjane June 25 2010, 11:26:48 UTC
(*hugs Spike*)

Achy and beautiful.

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spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:41:23 UTC
He does need a hug, doesn't he? I'll do it...

Thanks so much.

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spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:42:14 UTC
Thank you for saying so; it just kept mixing up in my head. Don't you just want to hold him and pet him and make it all better? Thanks again.

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jen_nsync_landl June 25 2010, 14:20:36 UTC
Ooo, love this! :) Wonderful imagery, and so very Spike in the thought process. Well done.

[I'm going to try to get some work accomplished this morning, so I can't read the longer piece now, but I'll save it to savor later!]

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spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:43:30 UTC
Aww, thank you! Glad you liked it. I do so love drabbles - completely different to writing anything longer because you really have to condense everything down. Very good writer's discipline, I think.

I'm with you on the reading - I've got the whole SeasonalSpuffy round to catch up on!

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