Comments | seasonal_spuffy: FIC : Always in My Blood (1/1)

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FIC : Always in My Blood (1/1)

Jun 25, 2010 00:57

Title : Always in My Blood (1/1 ( Read more... )

form: fic, era: btvs s5, rating: other, creator: spikesdeb

Comments 31

devylish June 25 2010, 00:26:14 UTC

“Spike,” she whispers, her voice full of questions she doesn’t know how to phrase, and I’m glad because I’ve no sodding answers for her. It just feels right, and I desperately hope that she feels something of what I’m feeling; it can’t just be me who knows that against all nature, this is where we belong. Shaking, I move even closer and shift so that I can place a soft kiss on her forehead. Her skin is warm, fragrant, and I commit it to memory, grasping at the sensation like a drowning man surfacing for air. I’ve no idea what I’m doing. I just don’t want to let her go.

rather brilliant section in a rather brilliant story.

spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:23:09 UTC

*blushes* Wow, thanks! Can't get better than that for a comment. I'm grateful and stunned, pleased you enjoyed. And your icon is just awesome!

kcarolj65 June 25 2010, 00:33:31 UTC

Oh, this is just lovely. Wonderful Spike voice, and how nice to see S5 Buffy treat Spike with something other than contempt and disgust.

*sigh* I just love these two. I've been hooked on Spuffy fanfic for five or six years now, and I never get tired of it. It's the best drug ever. ;)

spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:24:49 UTC

Thank you so much. When somebody thinks I've got the voice, that makes me very happy. I'm one of those diehard (some say delusional!) Spuffy fans who believes that what they had was destined, so all you'll get from me is more of the same! Spuffy fanfic keeps me sane, both reading and writing. We're a happy community. Thanks again.

treadingthedark June 25 2010, 01:10:12 UTC

Ooh nice. Love the whole progression of this story. Lovely scenes and moments.

spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:25:26 UTC

Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed this little snapshot of what SHOULD have been :)

rebcake June 25 2010, 05:58:53 UTC

Well, aside from forehead to forehead and all that heart-stoppingly vivid almost-romance, I got a huge kick out of the slapstick of the whole kitchen scene. Soup to nuts, m'dear.

spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:27:14 UTC

*giggles* Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the funnies; I just love the Spike/Dawn family dynamic. Dawn irritates some people, I understand that, but I just think she's a goofy, loving, typical younger sister and I love playing with that. Thanks for saying it was vivid too, much appreciated.

readerjane June 25 2010, 11:34:50 UTC

Beautiful.

spikesdeb June 26 2010, 20:27:55 UTC

Thank you so much. I think Spuffy is the most perfect thing.