Comments | seasonal_spuffy: One Like A Sneeze...

lilachigh in seasonal_spuffy

One Like A Sneeze...

Apr 30, 2006 06:13

So thrilled to be able to post on this free day. Starting with three haikus. If they’re not correct in form, my apologies to “sneeze” experts ( Read more... )

creator: lilachigh, form: poetry

Comments 4

botias April 30 2006, 05:31:47 UTC

And the free day is off to a fine start! Yay!

lilachigh April 30 2006, 06:33:25 UTC

thank you. I have a fic to post later today. Am trying to finish it as I write!

lillianmorgan April 30 2006, 07:06:08 UTC

Three interesting haikus to make a very enjoyable set. I enjoyed how you used the language so well in each and created such a vivid picture of the relationship at each of its different stages.
I particularly liked: The hunter’s trapped, though nice use of the apostrophe there ;)

beloved4always April 30 2006, 12:47:23 UTC

very nice. they truly encapsulate the ultimate point of each scene.

But who is shamed? indeed!