Fangirl's Verdict Aoi/Reita/Uruha/Ruki/Kai

[seannabirchwood]

Title: Fangirl's Verdict

Chapter: Oneshot

Author: SeannaBirchwood

Genre: Fiction, smut fic, present tense (for the first three paragraphs and the last three paragraphs), past tense for the rest

Rating: NC-17, R?

Warnings: yaoi, manxman, explicit sex, double penetration, alcohol, foul language, maybe a mini orgy?

Fandom: Jrock! The GazettE

Comments

[aoi_chan2306]

Well, I read it, like you asked me too. It was alright, but a points it was a little confusing. I wasn't a fan of this one, but thats me. You did fine, but as you always tell me, there is room for improvment. As smutty as it was, it wasn't my kind o story line, but its not as bad as you think

[seannabirchwood]

Could you tell me what parts were confusing?

[aoi_chan2306]

I couldn't anymore, I'd have to reread it. But, its just in the midst of all the smut, at times it just seems like you have too much *thinking really hard* like...what's going on with Aoi and Uruha, or what happened between Ruki and Reita, it was like you have three different stories all crammed into one little space. Thats me, i'm sure others don't think so, but i'm not others....

[gazette_luvr_15]

I loved it! I would have liked to have read about the girls reaction though. None the less I really liked it! Finally found another good all five of them together fic. I enjoyed that and I can't wait to read more of your work.

[seannabirchwood]

lol, I think it was a disaster of everyone all together fic, xD

Lj is where I post the stories I'm A) really proud of or B) they dont have the right content for dA...

lol, I'm so happy I have a fan ^^

[lewusilk]

Thanks for your share! very impressive!

[seannabirchwood]

weird... I'll see if I can fix it

[hellionx609]

I read this before... A long time ago. And I still love it

[seannabirchwood]

Thank you~ ^^

I used to be on here a lot, but when Amanda left, I lost my reason for coming lol