Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 4 (Asami/Akihito)

[sea_priest3ss]

Title: Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 4: Asami’s surprise
Author: priestess_grrrl
Series: Viewfinder
Pairing: AsamixAkihito
Rating: R-ish for being pr0n-ish
Genre: drama with a side order of crack. Lots of drama this chappie.

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Comments

[randrews25]

I totally love this!!
never heard of an ice cream called tempura until i read your fic.
You've written this really well, keep up the good work.

[sea_priest3ss]

Thank you! It's fried ice cream and it's REALLY GOOD. Sometimes it comes on fire! Yeah! Except probably not on delivery. But you know, Asami could probably get it for Akihito on fire if he wanted it that way. After all, Asami says jump, the world says how high...!

Thanks so much for reading! More soon! ^_^

[mustanginblue]

more more more!! I love this!

[sea_priest3ss]

Thanks, honey! ♥

[usersauba]

Takaba sure gave Asami an ear full which he surely deserved. It's funny how you described Asami's reaction to Takaba pointing a gun at him. I really like the subtle humor in this story.

[sea_priest3ss]

Thank you! I enjoy writing had-it-up-to-here!ukes, there's just something that's really fun about it! And I do like keeping Viewfinder fic light with an undertone of humor. Otherwise it can get way too dark WAY too easily. Maybe I'll feel like going there at some point with the darkfic, but for now, I'm really enjoying writing it kinda crack. Thanks for reading! ^_^

[farstrider]

This is rapidly becoming one of my favorite stories. . . I can't wait to see what happens next. . . oh, and I love this little exchange:

“I said let go of me, you bastard! You have no right to keep me here!”

“Akihito. This is your apartment.”

~FS

[sea_priest3ss]

Thanks so much! Yeah, that struck me as a particularly cute clueless!uke moment, so I had to put it in there. More soon! ^_^

[celeste_kagaya]

Hmmm.... that was intense. But it is really like Asami to get aroused by Aki with a gun. ^___^

[sea_priest3ss]

Thank you! Isn't it just like Asami? I mean, when I was thinking of top 10 things going through his mind when Aki pulls a gun on him, more than anger or concern or worry, #1 was definitely Horny as All Fuck. ^_~ Thanks for reading!