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New DS fic: "What They Teach At The Academy These Days"

Jan 03, 2007 15:19

Title: What They Teach At The Academy These Days
Author: SDWolfpup
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2600
Pairing: Fraser/Vecchio
Spoilers: None at all
Disclaimer: Not mine, not even a little.

Website link: here
A/N: I had this idea last week on vacation when I woke up before everyone else in the house. Thanks to brynnmck for letting me press her into beta ( Read more... )

fic post, due south

Comments 25

keerawa January 4 2007, 06:21:05 UTC

Oh, this was just delightful!

Much love for this line
He focused on Fraser, the only steady thing he could see. You always are, Ray thought. That’s what I love about you.

And also this one:
The Mountie was seducing him again. It was scandalous.

I was a touch surprised that Fraser went through with it, given how drunk Ray was. But then again, there was a plan, with a great deal of preparation involved, and Fraser would not be deterred. And also ... I think he just could not wait. Not one more day. Not one more minute.

*purrs*

sdwolfpup January 4 2007, 13:52:15 UTC

Thank you! I appreciate you pointing out which lines you liked. :)

there was a plan, with a great deal of preparation involved, and Fraser would not be deterred

Hee, yeah. And Fraser wouldn't have pressed the issue if Ray hadn't responded so well. *g* You've got to watch those Mountied - they do always get their man.

jenoofer January 4 2007, 09:37:15 UTC

I liked this. Very, very much.

sdwolfpup January 4 2007, 13:52:29 UTC

Thank you!

aingeal8c January 4 2007, 14:37:44 UTC

Hee hee I do like a sneaky Fraser. Seducing Ray, that naughty Mountie. Fun read :-)

sdwolfpup January 4 2007, 15:54:43 UTC

Thank you!

Your icon is very fun, too. :)

aingeal8c January 4 2007, 19:14:22 UTC

Thank you. One of my early MSPaint attempts ;-)

primroseburrows January 5 2007, 08:25:17 UTC

“Yeah, yeah, m‘fine,” Ray waved one hand airily, almost hitting Fraser in his blurry face. “Woah, sorry.” He blinked hard at Fraser, stared into his friend’s blue eyes. Blue like a really, really pretty shade of blue, Ray thought. “Hey Benny,” Ray whispered. Or at least he thought he'd whispered, but Fraser winced and made a “shhh” sound. “Benny,” Ray tried again, successfully.

You not only have Drunk!Ray's down, you have drunk! down, period. I can hear all the slurring and see the world spin through Ray's eyes. Yay! I love it. :)

sdwolfpup January 5 2007, 14:33:00 UTC

Hee! I'm glad the drunkness came through. Thank you!

spuffyduds February 19 2007, 04:20:06 UTC

I love love love "Dear God, don't let me have drooled." Funny and sweet and tasty.

sdwolfpup February 21 2007, 06:18:10 UTC

Aw, thank you! I have a soft spot for insecure Ray.