[oc] A Shadow Across. Chapter eleven.

[sdlucly]

I'm not even going to try to excuse myself, because there really isn't an excuse. I finished this story a while back, I think just before Jose came to back to visit Lima, and I still haven't finished posting it. For that, my deepest apologies.

Here, another chapter. I'll try to post the next one in a week, and then just one more for the end. *g*

Comments

[marsalka]

oooh, new chapter! I love this story, can't wait to read the rest

[sdlucly]

Thanks so much. It's been so much fun, writing it. *g*

[melster294]

Oh I am reading alright and crying and reading some more. I couldn't believe how well this was written So worth the wait - I loved how you captured the all encompassing feelings of grief and yet also that he sees the light at the end of the tunnel. Love the Seth Ryan time in the diner - wondeful wonderful stuff !! Please post the other chapeter soon

[sdlucly]

I'll probably post the next chapter either on Friday or Saturday. It's just that I get home so very tired, you know? Thanks!

[beachtree]

You know I don't do slash at all, but there's a wonderful story within a story here, meaning the backstory/flashbacks without Seth. In this case, I read the parts about Ryan and Mrs. Landingham and the start of that relationship upon Ryan's arrival. Very engaging and poignant.

[sdlucly]

Long time no see, babe! And yes, I know you don't do slash, but I just love this story to pieces. It took a piece of me with it, you know? *g*

Thanks so much for your words, babe, you know I always loved your comments.

[beachtree]

I'm glad you were feeling a story and the characters. If not for the slash, I would have felt the same way. You know it's a dealbreaker for me, but I could imagine the potential even if I couldn't get past the obvious once you intro'd Seth.

[60schic]

It's about time! But it was well worth the wait. It seems as if you may have added bits here and there because it reads even better than I remember it. Such a poignant story.

I would be remiss as your beta though, if I didn't point out one small thing you need to change: in the last section, about 1/4 from the end, you need to change the word "dinner" to "diner". There are about 4 or 5 of them. You can have dinner at the diner, but you can't sit in the dinner or you'll get mashed potatoes all over your butt!

Good job, sweetie.

[sdlucly]

I think I have added bits and pieces here and there, but mostly it's the same. Sometimes I go over it and add a line or two, but nothing much.

All fixed, thanks!

God, I need to go over chapter 12 and post it!!! *g*

[squishyturtle]

MOOOOAAAAR PLEEEEAAAASE
That pretty much sums it up. I'm so sad that it's almost over, I've been following it from the start. Thank you so much for sharing, it's been a pleasure to read and I can't wait to see the last parts.