[oc] Bright blue

[sdlucly]

So I'm on a roll. No, really. Not only did I write the sequel to Pancake Mix, but also, dude, it got beta in under a day. Can you believe that? *bounces*

Title: Bright blue
Author: M. F. Luder
Pairing: It's not Ryan/Seth.
Rating: Very PG-13.
Category: Bittersweet, in a way, because I can't stop myself. Future fic.
Challenge: For

Comments

[fifimom]

I'm really lovin Matty/Ryan + Cohens. I'm sorry but I'm not feelin any pity for Seth this time. The way you write Ryan being happy is just so nice to read. Thanks!

[sdlucly]

Oh, I totally get you. I feel so happy for Ryan. I think I'm totally projecting on Ryan here, feeling happy for once in so very long, you know? *bounces* Happy, so very happy.

But it is fun writing Happy!Ryan through Seth, though. So very fun. *bounces* And it's all about fun right now, for me.

[chazper]

I love that you're continuing this. You convey so much about Ryan's and Seth's relationship just with this glimpse of them at the Cohens together. And while I ache a little for Seth--yes I do--Matthew (Matty!) and Ryan seem perfect together, and I adore the fact that the Sandy and Kirsten know him and approve. Of course Sophie doesn't, but who can blame her? She just doesn't want to share her favorite big brother.)

[sdlucly]

Of course we all feel bad about Seth, but at the same time, Ryan's happy! And that's gotta come first, always, right? *nods*

Well, both Kirsten and Sandy know that Matt is good for Ryan and that he loves our woobie, so could be against that?

And yes, Sophie is all about the not sharing. Kinda like Seth, in that way. *g*

[nightrider101]

Can I beg for that other story now?

This is absolutely amazing. There's something poetic about your writing. I really mean that. There's a certain way you word things, a certain magic you have that's distinctly you and bloody magnificent.

Seth stares down at his plate. Lasagna, his mom's best recipe. He can hear his mom laughing at some silly story Matthew has told -- Matthew, please, I really don't like to be called Matt; except when Ryan calls him Matty, of course, like Seth hasn't noticed -- and his dad totally agrees on something else, something about the politics or one international dilemma or something just as insane because of course Matthew knows national politics and international politics and everything there is to know about the world at large.

That. All of that. Just, yes.

You're absolutely brilliant! I'm going to beg for another part of this.

Pretty please?

[sdlucly]

Oh, I was writing the third part, but the whole not getting comments kinda depressed me a bit. *g*

Aww, babe. That's so very nice of you. All writers have their style, and I guess mine is a little bit more... I don't know, boyish? Girly? I have no idea. But I know I can write my boys, so I'm still sticking with them.

Opening the word file right about now. Gonna see where the muses take me. *bounces*

[nightrider101]

Woot! Best news I've had all evening!

Speaking of styles, sometimes you run across someone whose writing style really speaks to you, and I think the way you word things appeals to me. A lot. :)

Looking forward to more, or whatever you might have in store for us!

[nysha63]

I love Happy!Ryan and I'm willing to forgive you for letting him be happy with Matt, because it's probably Seth's own damn fault for being so self-centered. But, I feel so bad for Seth. So very, very bad. He needs to be petted and loved and smacked for being so self-centered. But not by Ryan because Matthew is sooo good for Ryan.

[sdlucly]

We all love a happy Ryan, it kind comes with the territory. You can't love Ryan and not want him to be happy. *nods*

Yeah, it's totally Seth's fault, but still, we feel bad for the boy. I don't think even Seth realized he was being that much of an ass, you know?

I love Matty and how he cares for Ryan and everything. He's just too cute for words. *hugges OC*

Thanks for reading the story, babe!!!

[60schic]

Yeah...again I don't care about Seth's pain. And if I remember/read correctly, it wouldn't matter if Seth had been more attentive to Ryan since he couldn't/wouldn't fulfill this particular need for Ryan any way...right?

[sdlucly]

I think I have fun making him suffer, then again, that's nothing new.

Ohhh... but you know me better than that, don't you??? *g*