Comments | sdlucly: [oc] Pancake mix

sdlucly

[oc] Pancake mix

Jan 17, 2010 18:29

Not so long since my last short story, that's good. *g* This one has been an idea I was toying with for a while. I think I originally thought it'd be longer (and they always are, aren't they?) so probably why I never got around to writing it. But then picfor1000 had yet another challenge, and I figured, if I can't write it in 1000 words, I'll never write it ( Read more... )

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samueljames January 17 2010, 23:42:43 UTC

Lovely story with lots of sequel potential. I do like how happy Ryan is here though, he and Matthew seem very coupley.

sdlucly January 17 2010, 23:47:22 UTC

I can so write three more stories after this one, yes. It's weird, seeing and writing Ryan being happy with someone that isn't Seth. Then again, I like writing Seth as an ass, so maybe there's that. *g* Oh, I think Matty loves Ryan to pieces, he just isn't aware of the baggage there. *g* Thanks!!

samueljames January 17 2010, 23:57:33 UTC

I do like Seth/Ryan but fan-fics are great for the what ifs.

sdlucly January 18 2010, 02:09:56 UTC

Oh, I have a thing about AUS and what ifs. They are my ultimate favorite. *g*

60schic January 18 2010, 01:01:31 UTC

Horrors! SlashRyan that's not R/S ? Ryan intimate with some other curly headed boy? Blasphemy!

But no, I like HappyRyan and bad/rotten/not keeping in touch Seth. And I would very much like to see Seth's face when he realizes he blew his chance.

sdlucly January 18 2010, 02:11:13 UTC

I KNOW!

But I've had the idea swirling in my brain since forever, and now finally, it was the 1000 words that made me write it. And write it I did.

Oh, I can so see Seth glaring daggers at Matthew and maybe teaming up with Sophie to make The Boyfriend's life miserable? Uhh!!! PLOT!!!

ohmygod13 January 18 2010, 01:30:20 UTC

It's been so long since I've read OC fic, and I was kind of shocked to see Ryan with someone else, but I really liked this. Happy Ryan (even if it's not with Seth....yet....maybe *fingers crossed*) makes me happy.

sdlucly January 18 2010, 02:12:11 UTC

I know, it was weird writing him with someone else... but I kinda like this Matthew character and he really likes Ryan, so, he's kinda cool in my book.

Thanks for the comment!

flexible_k January 18 2010, 04:14:59 UTC

I like this a lot and that's a rarity because Seth/Ryan is my OC otp. But for some reason this Matthew seems like a good guy and I'm excited to know where it's going to go. Great, unexpected fic.

sdlucly January 18 2010, 04:29:40 UTC

I know! He seems like a really amazing guy. The kind of guy one might fall for so very easily, specially if one has not heard a single word from *cough*Seth*cough* in ages and is kinda pissed off. *g*

I so want to write a sequel... So very tempted!!!!

Thanks for the comment! *bounces*

larky_bird January 18 2010, 09:31:13 UTC

Awesome!!! It really turned out great! :)

I can't believe I missed it, but under the section that says "pour," there is a sentence that says "Ryan's door room" which I think is supposed to be "Ryan's dorm room." That is the only thing I saw during this read-through.

Seriously delightful! As everyone has been saying, Matty (heehee) seems great, but you know I'm the die-hard Ryan/Seth fan when it comes down to it. But I so love all the angst that additional pairings bring!!!

If you do go for the sequel, I'm sure it will be a damn good one however it writes itself! :)

sdlucly January 18 2010, 13:45:54 UTC

Dude, I can't believe we both missed it. I must have read the story like five times, easy. Totally fixed now.

He is cute, what with is Ryan calling him Matty and Matt not really liking being called that! *g*

Hey, we are BOTH totally hardcore in our love. I love those two boys (Ryan and Seth, of course!) like they were my own, but yes, other pairing brings in a little... spice, to the whole thing. *bounces*

When I think about it, I can't stop picturing Seth glaring at Matthew and Sophie really not liking him (like Matt himself said, even if Ryan didn't believe him) and the two of them kinda finding middgle ground there, you know??? *g*

larky_bird January 19 2010, 17:25:47 UTC

Finding middle ground...I love it! They team up and connect over that! heehee....so cute!!!

sdlucly January 19 2010, 19:28:33 UTC

I can so see that, you know? Sophie makes it perfectly clear to Seth that she likes Ryan and ONLY Ryan and that for all she cares, he could drop dead too. But, BUT, she kinda needs idiot big brother Seth to make it possible for evey more idiotic boyfriend she doesn't like, Matthew to go bye-bye. *giggles*

Yes, totally. *bounces* When are you EVER online?? Msn? Aim? PICK AND I'LL BE THERE!!! *g*