[oc] It can't always be so clear

Jul 01, 2008 22:03

So, every year for the past five (or is it four? I think it's five) years, I've done this, even though it's only been four season. It has been fun each and every time. *nods* This one was no exception.

To the straightest episode ever, here it is!!!

Title: It can't always be so clear
Author: M. F. Luder
Pairing: Ryan/Seth
Rating: NC-17
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missing scene challenge, fanfic100 stories, the oc: short stories, challenge response

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sar_bear4ben July 2 2008, 04:01:16 UTC
gahh i love it.

i loved how you expanded on from parts of the episode. i love the ambiguous ending

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sdlucly July 2 2008, 14:12:20 UTC
It was more than just fun to write it, it was a challenge. I love that. I got the straightest episode ever and I was able to give it a twist. *g*

I had move from there, because if I tried to re-write, I never would have finished it by the time the challenge was due. *g*

The ambiguity was what gave the story flavor, what let me do that twist. It was perfect. And thanks for your comment!

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jonsmom14 July 2 2008, 13:47:43 UTC
I was really wondering how you were going to pull this off. You exceeded my expectations! This was very well done!

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sdlucly July 2 2008, 14:13:49 UTC
God, at first I was really... well, scared is not the right word. *g* Mostly concern that I wasn't going to be able to write, considering everything the episode carried, but... it seemed to helped, in a way, when I just tilted my head and let myself see it with new eyes. It was so much fun!

I'm glad you liked it. I was able to write just a bit beyond the borders, blur the lines, that was the core of the fun. *g*

Thanks for your comment!

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sdlucly July 2 2008, 14:48:40 UTC
Because when you see a new story out there, even if you're dead on your feet, you just can't stop yourself. *g*

It was the longing that did it for me! I just had to write it. *bounces*

I'm glad you read it too. *nods* Thanks for the comment. You can, if you want, check out the rest of my work in the tags, or the links on the left side of the main page of my journal.

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smc36 July 2 2008, 14:29:27 UTC
Het? Wow - you did het! And as per your usual - the story is great! Het or no het - it's once again so well written.
And hey - now, with that ending, you can continue if you wanted, right?

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sdlucly July 2 2008, 14:53:26 UTC
It was very low key het, because I couldn't just pretend the episode didn't happen? I mean, dude, he was so into Taylor in that episode. *g*

The ending did leave it kind of open. I mean, you can tell from the story that Ryan was not only into Taylor, but he'd been thinking about Seth for some time now. That was what made me write this story, to be able to show this bit of Ryan. It was great. *g*

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alluxera July 2 2008, 18:14:28 UTC
I really like this, thank you for the wonderful story. Ryan thoughts are priceless.

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sdlucly July 3 2008, 04:36:49 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. It was a fun episode to explore. *g*

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