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sdlucly

[oc] The things I already know (1/3)

Sep 15, 2007 23:00

I can't believe the day is already here (okay, I'm about one hour early, but right now I don't care *g*). I finished this story with plenty of time to spare. It was the wait that was killing me! *nods* Okay, that said, here it is!

Title: The things I already know
Author: M. F. Luder
Pairing: Ryan/Seth.
Rating: PG-13.
Word count: 26'000 words.
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Comments 22

mylogiceatsyou September 16 2007, 06:24:13 UTC

I think this is the one I read part of in that email? So, I had to read it, lol.

I love the way you write Ryan with Sophie, it's all cute and...big brotherly. Whilst still being frustrated at the not shutting up of the baby :P

sdlucly September 16 2007, 15:55:55 UTC

Yeah, it is. I have a thing about Sophie. *bounces*

I think Ryan would be close to Sophie, considering that he'd feel, in a way, that she's his responsability. *shrugs* Or maybe that's just wishful thinking. *g* I like the not shutting up baby. She's cute like that! *giggles* Giving her big brother gray hair! *g*

jillbee7 September 16 2007, 06:24:21 UTC

Cute, cute, cute, CUTE is what I think! I love Ryan being all parental. And dear god, Sophie...the kid never stops! Poor Ryan. I'm excited for the rest of this. Oh, and I hope that Ryan and Seth get a chance to actually talk to each other.

sdlucly September 16 2007, 15:57:17 UTC

That kid is cute. I love my fandom! *huggles fandom*

The next two parts were to much fun to write. Sophie lets me have so much fun with her! I adore her! *bounces*

Thanks for your comment!

fredsmith518 September 16 2007, 09:15:17 UTC

This is his home, and this is his family, the little girl in his arms and the stupid boy on that chair, and a couple clear across the country lovely summation of Ryan's feelings

sdlucly September 16 2007, 15:53:09 UTC

He has to be feeling torn, about moving away, about leaving them behind in a way, even though he's still close. *shrugs* I like that about Ryan, or at least the Ryan I have in mind. *g*

helen_c September 16 2007, 12:52:19 UTC

Heh, poor Ryan. Perfectly able to stand up to thugs, but give him one baby and he's stumped (though, in his defense, the little girl sure makes it difficult).

Very nice; can't wait for the rest. :)

sdlucly September 16 2007, 15:54:26 UTC

*giggles* I wanted to write some cute for a change, and Sophie allowed me that. Oh, it gets better! Just wait for it! *nods*

I should be posting part two in an hour, and part three probably tonight. *nods* Thanks!

nightrider101 September 16 2007, 17:37:34 UTC

I LOVE it!! This was beautifully written. It was funny, but also had a bittersweet edge to it. It's sad to think about Seth and Ryan drifting apart.

He looks around him, around the house that now he calls home, if only because the Cohens live here instead of Newport. Newport will always hold a special place in him, the house he loved, the pool house he was able to call his. But now this is home, no matter where Dawn is, or how sporadic Frank's calls become. This is his home, and this is his family, the little girl in his arms and the stupid boy on that chair, and a couple clear across the country.

That was one of my favorite paragraphs. :) I can't wait to read the next two parts! Please post soon!

sdlucly September 16 2007, 18:11:45 UTC

I think I've fallen in love with Sophie. It's just... how could I not see that before? She opens endless possibilities for me! *bounces*

The next two parts should be posted tonight. My beta run into a bit of a problem with RL and mostly I'm just waiting for the two parts to be sent back. *nods*

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment!