Heart in a riot [Masterpost]

[scyllaya]

Title: Heart in a riot
Author: scyllaya
Artist: cashay
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Gabriel/Dean, Castiel, Sam in later chapters
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: slavery, graphic sexual content [non-con (slavery), mild D/S (master-slave)], cursing, blood [graphic injury], mentions of violence
Spoilers: none, AU
Summary: In a time where the creatures of the Five Worlds rule and

Comments

[ndmzero]

this sounds great. I took the pdf and will have to read off line. Thank you for sharing.

[scyllaya]

Hope you'll enjoy reading it. Have fun! And if you don't forget, do tell me what you thought about it after you read it. I just love to hear the opinions of my readers ^_^

[happyfeetmumble]

I just wanted to thank you for writing this. I can't handle the aksjjhjfa;fd

[scyllaya]

Yay for keyboard smashing! :D

You're welcome, and thank you for reading it ^_^

[slowsunrise]

I am super busy around these days, so it might take a while before I can finish a 55k fic, so I just wanted to pop in to tell you that it looks really good.

[scyllaya]

Awesome! Well, I hope you will enjoy it when you have time to read it :D

Mickey Mouse Clubhouse Conspiracies and Life lessons/new rules...?

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[kdheart]

I nearly skipped class today because I was reading this and just let time fly by. Stupid sexy archangel! Though I really couldn't use that excuse for being an hour late...

I loved every bit of it, particularly the ending. I have no idea why I have a soft spot of bitter-sweet endings, but I do and this is more sweet than bitter.

You should check for typos (there's quite a few of them) and repetitions. It's not too bad, but they can get distracting.

" [Gabriel] turned back towards what Dean was doing and picked up a toast from the plate that was there. He started crouching on it, while sipping his coffee." - this one in particular stands out.

(Sorry, but I've spent my weekend writing with a slave driving, Grammar Nazi dominatrix by my side and that sort of stuff affects me more than it usually does)

[scyllaya]

OK, seriously. No fic of mine has been spell-checked, grammar-proofed and beta-d as thoroughly as this one, so the fact that there are still quite a few typos... is beyond me.

English is my second language, so it seems like some typos are inevitable and that there would always be some left I'm sorry if it's distracting.

I'm glad you liked the story. Thank you for reading.

[kdheart]

I've just downloaded all of your stories that were available for download to read later :D Haven't read much Dean/Gabriel until now, but I'm always open to new pairings.

Actually, I think the more you look for them, the harder it is to spot typos. After going over a certain chapter 20 times, even the slave-driving, grammar Nazi dominatrix (which I am still traumatized by) missed most of the random typos in it.

[scyllaya]

I guess that's true. And since I wrote the sentences, I just read it the way I know it. Y'know, the way it is in my head, not what I actually wrote down. XD

And have fun reading those. There will be typos on the PDF versions, not as much as the online versions. I did spell-check some of my stories after uploading them and I didn't have time to update yet, so yeah. Try to ignore them, I know that they are not big mistakes, but mostly just spelling here and there, so...

I'm just trying to keep in mind that most fanfics that are out there have worse grammar than my fics XD (from experience)