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We walked a million hills - Chapter 26

Oct 30, 2011 16:49

Title: Trinity Verse II. - We walked a million hills (26/28)
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fanfiction, fic: we_walked_a_million_hills, au, verse: trinity, pairing: dean/castiel/gabriel, supernatural

Comments 28

auntmo9 October 30 2011, 16:56:55 UTC

It was good to learn more about Michael and by extension, Gabriel's childhood. And Michael... true forgiveness can't be earned.It needs to be freely offered and then accepted as the gift it is. I don't think Gabriel or Michael are in the place to offer or accept...

scyllaya October 30 2011, 17:06:03 UTC

They don't seem to be like at all. With everything between them.

Thank you for the comment :)

h4ppy_fun_b4ll October 30 2011, 17:20:42 UTC

You really have a knack for making the readers feel sympathetic for the supposed villains. I really enjoy that. I also just wanna give them all a big hug.

scyllaya October 30 2011, 17:35:13 UTC

Dance puppets dance! XD

But all seriously, I find the "everyone hates you because you're evil and hurting people because you enjoy it" kinda villains way too two dimensional. Not to mention, not human enough.

Flawed or broken up humans on the other hand tend to be interesting. Glad you are enjoying it :) Thanks for the comment :)

h4ppy_fun_b4ll October 30 2011, 18:52:38 UTC

Yes. Exactly that!

chef_geekier October 30 2011, 20:26:27 UTC

And now we have Michael's perspective on it. Interesting. He's certainly not the villain any more, even if he is an antagonist. Which is good, since evil villains are pretty few and far between when it comes to real life. Michael's actions are completely believable.

And Dean... honestly, he can't help himself, can he? Not allowed to beat Michael to a pulp, but still making sure that he knows what'll happen if he screws up again.

Enjoyed it all muchly.

scyllaya October 30 2011, 20:50:38 UTC

There's no way anyone can stop Dean Winchester from growling out deadly threats on behalf of his family.

I don't find true evil villains to be believable. Michael is still an antagonist sure, but this really gave him the kind of character depth I wanted him to have.

I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you!

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scyllaya October 30 2011, 21:18:02 UTC

I'm sure Gabriel does too, not like it changes anything, but still... he wanted to tell, just because. And I wanted to tell his side, just because it had to be written down.

cjab1234 October 30 2011, 23:05:16 UTC

Ok a little chocked up here about Michael i don't excuse what he has done but it is nice to see it from his point of view.. Still want to slap him silly... Now im so proud of Gabriel for standing and listening to his brother talk n he needs a huge kiss n hug.. n can i say wooooo to Dean i understand where he is coming from i would have done the same i loved this chapter Thank you for writing this :)

scyllaya October 31 2011, 09:52:19 UTC

Thank you so much! I just had to finally give Michael's story after so many chapters and Gabriel really was amazing for listening.

And yeah, Dean will be Dean, so he's gonna make sure his family is not hurt again.

I loved writing it, thank you for the comment :)