I loved every word of this. Your characterization is so spot-on that I can clearly hear and see them in my head as I read this. Ben's self-doubting and awkward inner monologues, your Chris: “Sit! Would you like a BrillWater? It’s infused with extra oxygen and electrolytes. It’s absolutely changed the way I do cardio!”
Hee. Just perfection. If you keep writing Ben/Leslie, I promise I'll keep reading it. :)
You are TOO KIND. Not just kind, but TOO kind, see that?
I gotta say, I LOVED writing Chris. Chris was THE EASIEST for me. I kinda maybe want to write a just Chris fic? I DON'T KNOW! I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M SAYING!
Loved this! Their hidden conversation in the booth was just so perfect. I love your Leslie-and-Ben voices. And your Chris. And now I desperately want to see Ben and Donna bond. But possibly I just want to watch the All About Donna Show. :D
Hee. I just figured maybe you replied from your phone or something. I just got a new phone and I've been sending horribly auto-corrected messages to everyone I know for days now. :)
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God, that game was just intense. So super intense. I actually thought I was going to vomit several times. Eep!
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“Sit! Would you like a BrillWater? It’s infused with extra oxygen and electrolytes. It’s absolutely changed the way I do cardio!”
Hee. Just perfection. If you keep writing Ben/Leslie, I promise I'll keep reading it. :)
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I gotta say, I LOVED writing Chris. Chris was THE EASIEST for me. I kinda maybe want to write a just Chris fic? I DON'T KNOW! I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M SAYING!
I will continue writing these then, it's a deal!
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AND WE ARE YELLING.
AWESOME!
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Those are the only words I can formulate right now...sorry! ;)
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Gah, it's just so friggin fun to write these two little scamps.
And the words that you formed are WUNDERBAR! Thanks again!
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And THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READY! :)
...eta... not going to change that because I think it's amusing. But READING. Thank you for READING.
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Fun times!
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