how can you get caught between the moon and new york city? they're like a hundred miles apart.

[scullyseviltwin]

Here's a clip of Chris Meloni on last night's Jimmy Fallon. Wet. Le sigh.

Already watched tonight's SVU. I recommend it. We'll talk about it later, yeah? And besides, who's watching L&O: L.A. tonight, because I sure as hell am! SKEET

Comments

[lowriseflare]

Trails fingers from the center of his hand to the valley between index and thumb

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH I WANT TO TAKE IT BEHIND THE MIDDLE SCHOOL AND GET IT PREGNANT, ETC ETC.

Just, everything, "sodium arc" and talking to Elizabeth through the fence and Mozzie likes to solve things and how he keeps the bullet, how Neil blames Peter but doesn't, really, how could he?

OH MAN, write it forever. I love how spare and evocative this all was.

[scullyseviltwin]

You want to pull a Tracy Jordan? That's gross but also amazing.

THANK YOU! Poor little adorable Neal and his obvy man pain. It's so addictive, isn't it?

Thanks again, next one will be longer. I promise. Maybe. Probably not.

[lonetread]

Wow. o_o This is amazing. Especially, the last line is gorgeous. The last line of every section, actually. I love them all. <3

[scullyseviltwin]

Thanks so much! I really appreciate the feedback, as I got a few over at ff.net that were to the effect that people were confused by the writing as well as the emotional response that Neal was having i.e. blaming Peter.

I get so disappointed in myself when people don't understand my writing, so I'm glad that the few of you that read this over here at lj enjoyed.

And wow, I just totally unloaded on you! Heh, sorry.

[lonetread]

No worries re: unloading, I get it. That happened to me with one of my fics recently too; people thought they weren't confused, but they were. ): It is definitely disappointing. I'm glad I could help combat that.

(And hee, your icon. "Jose Chung's", man. Now that was confusing.)

[rabidchild]

Very powerful, with minimal prose, elegant. Well done! The scene with Elizabeth especially.

[scullyseviltwin]

The scene with Elizabeth, I kind of love as well, as totally egotistical as that is to say. I think it may be one of my more personally favored segments of writing that I've done, so I'm super glad that reached you.

Woo hoo, thanks for reading. I really appreciate it, as always.

[ssw_loved]

Pretty freaking amazing, that's what this was.

[scullyseviltwin]

Short, sweet, I love it, heh. Thank you so, so, so much for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate it.

[broken_enemy]

Loved it. You write so beautifully.

I need to this show to come back asap.