zomg csi fic, whaaaat?

[scullyseviltwin]

Tito pokes fun at Kottaras, likening him to a goalie and it made my freakin' morning. There's nothing more I can say about how positively worthless Lugo is in the rotation; just keep Green in for the rest of the season. Send Julio back to Pawtucket.

I haven't managed to see Rescue Me because I can't FIND it anywhere. This upsets me a bit.

So

Comments

[mingsmommy]

See? You do this thing where you take the most ordinary thing and instill it with so much meaning and emotion and even when it's beautiful and right it makes me ache. You're too talented for words.

[scullyseviltwin]

Oooooh, thank you. This was both exciting and difficult to write, and it was only 1,000 words. Guh, these two characters have so much PAIN between them that it's just... such good fodder for fic.

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!

[lizwontcry]

and he craves the knowledge that he's one of the only ones to see her do it. That whole paragraph is just lovely...that he wants something secret from her but can't have it; that the sex is the only secret he can have. That is powerful stuff.

[scullyseviltwin]

I've always felt that they would both be a bit insecure after their, you know, first night in the sack. I've explored it before, but this just came to me, and well, thought it was a different take.

Glad you enjoyed.

[marcasite]

Wow, how can making the bed be so amazing? This simple act becomes a catalyst for something more. I had no idea you were going towards the vacant spot he created when he left to get coffee and somehow that picked up an entirely different meaning all together.

Awesomesauce, bb! Awesome.

[scullyseviltwin]

Actually, I personally get some serious joy out of making the bed with fresh linen. I can't wait to crawl back in and go to sleep... obvs, Griss and Sara wouldn't be sleeping in this sitch but... whatever, heh.

I wanted to balance their insecurities and sort of leave it up to the reader where they thought the morning would go so...

Thanks for reading, dear!

[spanky743]

Wow. Who knew making the bed could have that much depth to it? This was just incredible.

"he'd said things, things that he could honestly not repeat as they'd been so intimate and real that he was nearly embarrassed to recall them."
I loved this sentence. It is exactly how I imagine Grissom would feel.

Lovely.

[scullyseviltwin]

Thank you so much, it's so fun to try and get into Grissom's head, and it was such a good feeling, writing him once again!

[smacky30]

And this is why I love you.

[scullyseviltwin]

:::hugs::: Thanks!