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Sentences

Jul 22, 2007 23:01

I know it's a wee bit passed the deadline, but I still hope it's okay to post what I had gotten done and completely forgot to post. :)

Sparrington Sentences based off of the one word prompts

( 20 total )

Comments 12

porridgebird July 23 2007, 13:24:59 UTC

These are lovely!! Thank you! Will there be more?

st_minority July 25 2007, 19:22:21 UTC

Thank you! XD I hope I can bang out some more. I kind of put them to the side, but I have been wanting to go back and write more!

_varda July 23 2007, 14:38:56 UTC

I absolutely enjoyed these. They are very inspirational. I'm particularly fond of number two. It's very romantic. Did you make any more? I would love to read them if you did.

st_minority July 25 2007, 19:23:29 UTC

I am very happy to hear that. Thank you! I would love to do more. Right now, I only have just one that didn't make it on here, but if I write more, I'll be sure to post them! :D

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st_minority October 9 2007, 00:03:39 UTC

Thank you! Number 6 was one of my favs too. :)
It's all good! You're not horrible! :D

smithkingsley June 3 2009, 18:20:57 UTC

I adore #13.

Sorry my comment's a couple of years late! I figured, better late than never.

st_minority June 3 2009, 18:35:17 UTC

Whoa! Never thought I'd get another comment on this thing! You're absolutely right - better late than never. :) Thanks so much for finding it and reading!

smithkingsley June 3 2009, 18:44:02 UTC

Glad you didn't mind, because I tend to read stuff that was written years ago and I'm sometimes afraid I might annoy writers who've moved on to other fandoms!

Seriously, this is really beautiful.

st_minority June 12 2009, 03:11:09 UTC

Well you can rest assured that you'll never annoy me with late comments! Whether they're quick or late, comments always make me smile. :)

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed. Maybe I can whip up some more in the future. ;)

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biting_moopie July 24 2009, 07:49:25 UTC

I am so very sorry for the very late comment and review. Thank you so much for participating and producing such gorgeous work! What an imaginative way to use the one-word prompts.

I love your mini-stories. There is so much imagery and emotion and detail in just one or two sentences. I started to list my favourites but found it was impossible to decide because each one is unique. I think what really makes this work is that there is a lot of variety of emotions here: angst, joy, grief, insecurity, love. Sometimes James is the one who has to open up and sometimes it's Jack. That's why the last one was so powerful - we usually expect Jack to be asking James to prove his love and this time it was the other way around.

Thank you again! Please do post if you write more in the future.

st_minority July 30 2009, 06:10:39 UTC

Wow. That's great you found this! And thanks for commenting!

It was definitely hard to have only the one or two sentences; I have a bad habit of turning something short into something very long. :) I haven't thought about this pairing (or any POTC pairing for that matter) for awhile, but I would love to come back and finish these. Maybe one or two more will trickle out sometime. :D