The Other Doctor - Part 2/?

Oct 25, 2010 16:04



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anonymous October 26 2010, 00:22:46 UTC
Absoluely love the way you write them, and the moments you create for them. Kate's "You're beautiful" seemed to flow so easily like it actually happened on the show. I also like how you are developing them while managing to avoid tons of random, useless conversations with the rest of the beach camp. It really makes this story enjoyable focusing on K/J, but also adding just enough interaction and circumstance with other characters to keep it realistic. As always can't wait until the next chapter, and where you take their characters. Thanks again for writing this. You're awesome!

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scrolllocke October 26 2010, 01:14:23 UTC
Thanks for the encouragement. The set-up of this story makes it rather difficult to work in a relationship and I'm fairly certain I was drunk for most of seasons 3-6 because I can barely remember the timeline. Lostpedia is a story saver - as is whiskey.

I don't dig dealing with the other characters because anything that could have developed between Kate and Juliet on the show would have been "off-screen" or private or whatever you want to call it considering Jack and Sawyer.

The next chapter is going to get uber confusing because everyone was here and there and everywhere in a short amount of time and Kate and Juliet barely spoke. I'll need to consult the whiskey ASAP.

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anonymous October 26 2010, 01:39:16 UTC
The easiest thing to do would be to just have Kate jump off the chopper instead of Sawyer when she realizes Juliet won't make it off the island. You could avoid all the chaos by just writing Kate's thoughts of what happened leading up to her jumping while she's swimming back to shore. It's a long swim:) Plus Dharmaville would be the easiest place to write the majority of the story and their time together. Especially with the guys both off island. JMO not that you wanted it or asked for it.

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scrolllocke October 26 2010, 02:06:35 UTC
I was going to attempt to not have Kate jump off the chopper - and leave it as is/was ... with 3 years of wondering what might have been ... and then extend their time together in Dharmaville once Kate returns - maybe give 'em like 3 months before the incident happens. I'd like to say more but I don't want to spoil it in case I end up writing it this way.

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noangel2046 October 28 2010, 08:22:33 UTC
this's my currently favourite fic of kate/juliet,hope there'll be more soon~

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scrolllocke October 28 2010, 18:41:46 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting! I appreciate it.

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:) myqueen00 October 28 2010, 14:42:08 UTC
I like where you're going with this! The ending made me laugh! :) You're an excellent writer! I really do hope you post every Monday! But don't worry, I am not expecting it. haha. ;)

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Re: :) scrolllocke October 28 2010, 18:43:16 UTC
Thanks for taking time to comment. Comments give me motivation that I would otherwise lack. The holiday weekend might get in the way of a Monday release ...

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