Fic: Anyone Could See

[scribooty]

Title: Anyone Could See
Rating: Mature
Category: Angsty. Sort of.
Pairing: Harry/Hermione
Word Count: 4033
Summary: They never talk about it, even though anyone could see what was going on... a secret that the world could walk in on.

Notes: This was written for simons_flower for the smutty_claus fic exchange. It's a bit angstier than I usually write,

Comments

[sweet_iolanthe]

omg. i loved it!
very nice. well done. it was really well written and it had me from beginning to end.

he reached out a hand, and mirroring the earlier gesture that had so disturbed him, brushed her hair away from her face

[scribooty]

thanks so much, I really appreciate the nice words! :)

[adamolupin]

Awww, I like it! At first I thought they didn't talk about it because they were married, but I'm glad they weren't.

It had the right amount of angst and fluff. XD Very nicely done babe!!

[scribooty]

Yay, I'm so glad you liked it!! :D

(and yeah, if it had been an affair fic, I definitely would have put a warning)

[ladybluestar]

Lovely piece, dear. I really liked how it started as quiet lust and how it's emphasized that it's the one thing that's unspoken between them.

The change with Harry's protectiveness was just fantastic. Lovely descriptions with the differences between love and lust.

[scribooty]

Aw, thanks so much for the nice words -- I definitely wanted to show the growth in the relationship without dialogue and actually saying "love", so I'm glad you thought it worked out! :)

[darth_kittius]

Very nicely done. I love that they didn't talk about it and then when they did... they didn't really need words. They knew what that one was about. Very well done!

[scribooty]

lol, yeah, finally when they CAN talk about it, it's already understood. I love H/Hr, they always seem to make situations like that work out! ;D

[sellthelie]

I read this over there, LOVED IT. Very, very nice. ♥

[scribooty]

Aw, thanks so much, I'm glad some people enjoyed it, I liked writing it! :)