LJ Idol Week 10: Icarus

Jan 22, 2011 12:18

My dad has a large hill beside his house. The first time it snowed while we were out there, my brother and I immediately saw it as the perfect sledding hill, except for one small problem. It dead-ended in some pretty thick woods. Of course, being around twelve and six, respectively, we didn’t at first see this as a problem. We’d just stop the sleds ( Read more... )

writing, ljidol

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myrna_bird January 23 2011, 18:56:37 UTC
I remember sliding once with a friend double-decker. We went airborne and landed so hard, I had the wind knocked out of me. It was so scary till I could breathe again.

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scriblesnbraile February 5 2011, 16:39:08 UTC
Oh, wow. I bet that was scary.

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sweeny_todd January 24 2011, 06:22:40 UTC
this was really nice!!

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scriblesnbraile February 5 2011, 16:40:09 UTC
Thank you!

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ecosopher January 25 2011, 02:15:23 UTC
I can't decide if you're crazy or brave to keep trying :) A bit of both, maybe?!

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scriblesnbraile February 5 2011, 16:40:46 UTC
Lol. Sometimes I can't decide either.

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team_jessie January 25 2011, 03:17:34 UTC
This was great (and really makes me want to go sledding) :-D

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scriblesnbraile February 5 2011, 16:42:01 UTC
Thanks. Writing it kind of made me want to go sledding, too.

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wyliekat January 25 2011, 15:26:46 UTC
I like how this emphasizes the getting up part of the story, especially in that there were three separate instances. Nice piece.

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scriblesnbraile February 5 2011, 16:42:41 UTC
Thank you.

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