FIC: BeWentzed (Part 4/4)

[scribblinlenore]

Comments

[gemmi999]

Okay, I loved your Pete/Patrick interaction! I loved how Patrick had to gradually realize what he wanted and how Pete helped him, in a very very roundabout way. The sex was hot (of course) but really? The entire piece shined because of your characterization of Pete and how he react to Patrick and yeah, he really would fuck the wishes over and everything! *nods*

[scribblinlenore]

I'm so glad you liked this and thought the characterizations worked! I figured even as the devil Pete would have to go his own way and do his own thing. *g*

[scribblinlenore]

Awww, yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. And I hope the pizza was good! :)

[velocityoftime]

Oh my goodness, I loved your characterization of Pete and Patrick, and their interactions, and the entire concept of this story, really. This was so good, I can't even really explain it using words, just loud incoherent noises. Great job!

[scribblinlenore]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Writing Pete as the devil and Patrick as his temptee was really good fun! :)

[ohfreckle]

I haven't even read it because I just came home, but I am so excited you finally posted it! Your warning of underage sex has me already flailing (bb!Patrick ♥).
Will be back with coherent feedback later *g*

[scribblinlenore]

I hope you enjoy it!! :)

[animealexis]

This was too awesome for words. Pete breaking the rules for Patrick, and Patrick being turned gay by the devil, and the almost!meeting with Joe the first time around... I can't think of a single thing I disliked about this story. Too wonderful. Thank you!!

[scribblinlenore]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Writing Pete as the devil was really quite amusing, I have to say!