Title: Lessons In Looking Human Author: scribblinlenore Fandom: Profit Pairing: Bobbi/Jim Rating: R Summary: Training is not just for astronauts. Warnings: Underage sex
You wrote Profit! Yes! It's fantastic and he's young but you can see the beginnings of the way he will be.
Love the stuff about him trying to sleep in a bed and how it's too open for him. Love him starting to realize how Tina is looking at him. Oh and his plans for her bf.
Thanks so much, doll! I recently rewatched all the Profit episodes, and Jim Profit has to be one of the most delightfully amorally sexy characters ever. I'm sad the show was so much before it's time. If it aired today on Showtime or HBO, I have no doubt it would be a huge hit.
Writing this was tough. The thought of Bobbi with a very young Jim is really kind of stomach turning. Which is highly ironic considering all the underaged Clark stuff I cheerfully wrote. *g*
I love what you did with this! I can see some of the changes, but not all of them, and you've made him as opaque, menacing and yet sympathetic as he is in the series. Wonderful!
Yay! I'm glad you thought the changes worked. I have to tell you, I'm writing Profit/Lex for my Black Dress Lex story, and the marathan has been SO inspirational. :)
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Love the stuff about him trying to sleep in a bed and how it's too open for him. Love him starting to realize how Tina is looking at him. Oh and his plans for her bf.
Go you with the Profit writing! I'm so happy.
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I'm glad you liked this story!
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I'm glad you liked the story!
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I repeat: yay!
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Btw, that's one of my favorite quotes in your icon! :)
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(And still very sick and all that *g*.)
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I'm glad you liked the story!
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