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Profit FIC: Lessons In Looking Human (R)

Feb 24, 2007 12:19

Title: Lessons In Looking Human
Author: scribblinlenore
Fandom: Profit
Pairing: Bobbi/Jim
Rating: R
Summary: Training is not just for astronauts.
Warnings: Underage sex

Notes: This is for slodwick's a picture is worth 1000 words challenge. Big thanks to moonlash_cc and linaerys for their help with this story.

( She smells like powder, and it makes him cough when she comes into his room, sits on the edge of his bed, hand tight to the back of his head, pressing his face into the crook of her neck… )

profit_fic, profit, fic

Comments 18

kelly_girl February 24 2007, 19:18:35 UTC

You wrote Profit! Yes! It's fantastic and he's young but you can see the beginnings of the way he will be.

Love the stuff about him trying to sleep in a bed and how it's too open for him. Love him starting to realize how Tina is looking at him. Oh and his plans for her bf.

Go you with the Profit writing! I'm so happy.

scribblinlenore March 3 2007, 15:36:17 UTC

Thanks so much, doll! I recently rewatched all the Profit episodes, and Jim Profit has to be one of the most delightfully amorally sexy characters ever. I'm sad the show was so much before it's time. If it aired today on Showtime or HBO, I have no doubt it would be a huge hit.

I'm glad you liked this story!

spike21 February 24 2007, 21:35:30 UTC

mmm. Profitfic. Jimmy/Bobbi -- so awful and so probable.. Good job.

scribblinlenore March 3 2007, 15:38:22 UTC

Writing this was tough. The thought of Bobbi with a very young Jim is really kind of stomach turning. Which is highly ironic considering all the underaged Clark stuff I cheerfully wrote. *g*

I'm glad you liked the story!

serrico February 24 2007, 22:22:27 UTC

Profit fic! YAAAY!!!!! I love the way you used the launch; between the countdown, and Jimmy and Bobbi and all their *dysfunction*... *g*

I repeat: yay!

scribblinlenore March 3 2007, 15:41:41 UTC

I'm so glad you liked this! And I'm thrilled to find other Profit fans. Yay!

Btw, that's one of my favorite quotes in your icon! :)

linaerys February 25 2007, 19:07:26 UTC

I love what you did with this! I can see some of the changes, but not all of them, and you've made him as opaque, menacing and yet sympathetic as he is in the series. Wonderful!

(And still very sick and all that *g*.)

scribblinlenore March 3 2007, 15:43:25 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you thought the changes worked. I have to tell you, I'm writing Profit/Lex for my Black Dress Lex story, and the marathan has been SO inspirational. :)

ahab99 February 25 2007, 23:16:52 UTC

Excellent! Now that I actually know who these people are, of course. ;) Man, they are so creepy...

scribblinlenore March 3 2007, 15:44:42 UTC

SO creepy, indeed. In fact, they seemed even creepier the second time around watching the eps. That's some serious creepiness! *g*

I'm glad you liked the story!