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FIC: The Three Trials of Segeeth (Smallville)

Dec 16, 2005 23:08

Title: The Three Trials of Segeeth
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Kal/Lex
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Can love conquer all?

Dedication: This is for catmoran, who waited very patiently, much longer than she should have had to.

Note: This is a sequel to Inaureme, and probably won't make much sense unless you've read that story first. Big thanks to pun who gave me ( Read more... )

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Comments 81

svmadelyn December 17 2005, 05:08:19 UTC

Awwwww, Lenore, this was awesome. I was actually extremely sympathetic toward Jor-El throughout this; and I kept twitching wanting to bop Kal upside the head; I found him really setting me on edge just like his father! *giggles*

Now I'm picturing Lex doing a kind of frenetic Kryptonian dance, and really, that's a very lovely thought.

scribblinlenore December 19 2005, 20:40:42 UTC

Yay! Glad you liked it, doll. And, actually, now I too have a picture in my head of Lex doing a frenetic Kryptonian dance. Good times! *g*

dameange December 17 2005, 05:23:41 UTC

oh my God, this was so sweet and so fabulous. thank you so much for writing it.

scribblinlenore December 19 2005, 20:42:52 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! This story too me forever to write, and it means so much that you enjoyed. Thank you!

d_copper December 17 2005, 05:44:11 UTC

Wow! I loved this, it is great to read the sequel to Inaureme. This feels like an early Xmas present.

scribblinlenore December 19 2005, 20:44:00 UTC

Oh, thank you! That's an early Christmas present to me. I'm so glad you liked this!

norwich36 December 17 2005, 06:21:59 UTC

I was so excited to see that you had written a sequel to "Inaureme," and really this is an amazing story. You've really created a complex Kryptonian mythology and culture, and presented it in a way that is both very detailed and just alien enough to really remind us it *is* a different culture, but allow us to remain sympathetic to Jor-El ( ... )

scribblinlenore December 19 2005, 20:46:46 UTC

This is just the best feedback ever! Thank you so much for it! This story was really hard to write, because of the Jor-El POV and figuring out all the Kryptonian stuff, and it means so much that you enjoyed it. I really, really appreciate your taking the time to comment on it in such detail. It makes me very happy!

luvmax1 December 17 2005, 06:29:50 UTC

Inaureme was one of my all time favorite Smallville stories. I can't tell you how thrilled I am that you wrote a sequel. And what a sequel! This was amazing, Lenore. Thank you so much.

scribblinlenore December 19 2005, 20:49:24 UTC

Yay! This story took forever to write, and it really means a lot to me that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for letting me know!