Angst, Fluff, and Inferno

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This entry is part 48 of 51 in the series 365 Challenge
Let's take the third first. Overhauling the story from inferno, aka "Dowse and Bleed," left me feeling drained and exhausted, but it's out to beta and may she not find any more structural issues that need addressing. For that matter, may I not!

On angst: I write a lot of it. I know that. I've

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Kingdoms and Thorn Ficlet: What’s in a Name?

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A/N: Not the best first look at Kilter, but think of it as the two of them putting on a good face for their daughter, because that's exactly what they're doing.

“What do you think of Lisbeth?” Elisabeth asked as she dropped onto the living room rug, crossed her arms on her dad, and leaned on her hands

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[thecatisacritic]

I like Kilter as her pillow, but then I am a sucker for people as pillows.

The book she's reading is a nice touch, goes back to the other story with the bedtime story.

(I admit, I know nothing of who Shift's daughter becomes, but I do know an Elizabeth that goes by Bets, (Betsy) and I almost think that could fit Shift's daughter, but like I said, I don't know her that well.)

Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Ficlet: What’s in a Name?

[scribble_myname]

:giggles: Pillowing is cute as a rule.

Watcher once said that there were only two ways left to reach Shift: the daughter in her or the mother. In those two areas, Shift utterly excels.

I'm leaning toward letting her change her name as she ages. Of all names, Elisabeth does have a billion nicknames.

Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Ficlet: What’s in a Name?

[thecatisacritic]

Yes, it is. :)

She does still have that.

That might be best. Or maybe she takes a handle like all the operatives did?

Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Ficlet: What’s in a Name?

[scribble_myname]

Already know that one: Flex.

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[thecatisacritic]

:)