5 Things Meme-of the Ficlet Variety

Aug 04, 2013 13:03


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Kingdoms and Thorn Snippet: Call Me If You Need Me scribble_myname September 15 2013, 22:30:44 UTC
A/N: I sense the impending doom of several full-length short stories/novelettes, but for the moment, have a snippet that fits the prompt. :grins:

"Cate," Ilsa said slowly, "exactly how much experience does your contact have with cold data?"

Cate was busy marking off clincher cases, essentially the stack of reports from other law enforcement departments in the city on how they had handled anyone that turned out to be a special-type human. Cate's job was to ensure the Unit didn't have to bat cleanup behind them.

At Ilsa's question, she sat up and her eyes unfocused for a moment. "My contact?"

Marc commented from his own stack of paperwork, "The processor."

"Rachelle?" Cate made a point of focusing in on Ilsa, who nodded. "How cold? What kind of data?" she promptly returned.

"I have a dimensional empathic signature and no forensics obtainable by normal means."

Cate blanched.

Marc looked up with interest. "Been walking the city again?"

Jarod cursed impressively. "Please let me know when you're going to do that. I need to get ( ... )

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Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Snippet: Call Me If You Need Me thecatisacritic September 16 2013, 00:26:40 UTC
Hmm. Interesting type of case. That would be a snippet worth going longer with.

Also interesting is Ilsa's habit of walking the city. That needs more exploration as well.

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Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Snippet: Call Me If You Need Me scribble_myname September 16 2013, 00:35:27 UTC
Yes. I feel no empathy from she whose stories sprawl on her all the time. :grins:

That's part of how I met Ilsa. Will have to find more time to show this habit of hers.

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Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Snippet: Call Me If You Need Me thecatisacritic September 16 2013, 00:45:21 UTC
Um... Well, I didn't even manage to keep one of those prompts to 100 words, and short never seems to work for me, so... sprawling is... inevitable, and maybe sometimes I want other peoples' stuff to sprawl so I have things to read. I also now feel the need to write a sequel to something that should not be allowed a sequel because the first was too long, and I'd like to blame it on you, too, so... no sympathy here.

Ilsa in the city could be part of your next prompt fest. Or another of these.

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Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Snippet: Call Me If You Need Me scribble_myname September 16 2013, 00:47:10 UTC
I'm going to have to pick a theme other than fluffy, I see. :ponders:

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Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Snippet: Call Me If You Need Me thecatisacritic September 16 2013, 00:59:08 UTC
Mostly fluffy?

Because one still wants fluff, of course, but sometimes fluff won't answer prompts. As I noticed several times with mine. I still don't know how to get Quinn that bump to knock sense into him.

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Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Snippet: Call Me If You Need Me in_the_blue September 17 2013, 06:29:08 UTC
I like this. I keep seeing Ilsa as something like Joan Allen's Pamela Lundy in the Bourne films. I could be completely wrong, but she strikes me as having the same kind of dedication, determination, persistence, and focus.

I also really like the potential with the interfacers. That's... really something.

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Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Snippet: Call Me If You Need Me scribble_myname September 17 2013, 14:42:03 UTC
Yay. I haven't seen Pamela Lundy, but you definitely got the right adjectives for Ilsa. She's the most unflappable unstoppable female character I think I have.

Yeah. I've got to do something with the interfacers.

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