Oh, I'm so GLAD that Hellspawn got arrested. And I hope that Lindsay and Allie didn't screw up too much. Also, I have a vision of Hellspawn's lawyer learning in court that his client lied to him about everything and quitting on the spot.
Here's the link to the comment dealing with where Leila was when and why:
Oh yes, the shit was arrested out of Grey. :D Of course, I'm still writing the epilogue and not quite sold on the trial scenes yet, so I can't promise you anything.
Yeah, you tell them, Officer Rayne! I like her and the girls even more now.
“So, in the time since you were last in contact with Officer Rayne, you and miss Aliea Veldon followed Christian Grey to Bellevue in order to observe his actions, have been harboring a fugitive from a mental hospital, followed said fugitive to Christian Grey’s place of residence, somehow came into contact with two members of his security team, discovered that he was staying at the Fairmont, immediately went to the Fairmont, again attempting to find said fugitive, and… entered the hotel room. - Well, that sounds bad when you put it like THAT...
It's her job to be suspicious, and to tell off private detectives who make a nuisance of themselves and nearly tangle up her investigation. ;D
You'll learn more about Leila in the epilogue, but for a given value of Okay, Leila will be all right. :D
Grey getting arrested is going to be the highlight of everyone's Tuesday, I think. Knowing him, he managed to add verbally abusing the police and obstructing justice to his charge list.
Yeah, I figure Officer Rayne will eventually forgive them too. :D
It's that time of year, unfortunately. I was hoping to get the Epilogue out by Tuesday, but finals want to kill me, so I feel your pain. Plus, the epilogue covers a lot of crap - I'm going to have to put Grey's position in my worldbuilding in there, because there was too much information for any other place. (And it's really awkward, because I need to explain some things that both of them should know about already...)
My only hint is that there are no creatures in my universe, just people. What he's doing is magic, for a given value of magic, but he doesn't control it.
*stunned* How can the next chapter be the epilogue already? *flails arms*
I hope Grey's super ego is making him shake with such great anger that he will be tortured by it. :P Either that or he feels genuinely remorseful and apologises to his victims, but that doesn't seem very possible, haha.
What about his aura that is eating up all the other women's? :X He didn't need to be near them to inflict some form of suffering on them, so how are they going to get rid of those nasty tentacles?
I'm not too worried about Lindsay and Allie, actually. They can always disappear for a while if they need to! ;)
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Here's the link to the comment dealing with where Leila was when and why:
http://das-sporking.livejournal.com/558600.html?thread=15697416#t15697416
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Thanks for the link!
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“So, in the time since you were last in contact with Officer Rayne, you and miss Aliea Veldon followed Christian Grey to Bellevue in order to observe his actions, have been harboring a fugitive from a mental hospital, followed said fugitive to Christian Grey’s place of residence, somehow came into contact with two members of his security team, discovered that he was staying at the Fairmont, immediately went to the Fairmont, again attempting to find said fugitive, and… entered the hotel room. - Well, that sounds bad when you put it like THAT...
Will Leila be OK?
On the upside - Grey got arrested! YAY!
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It's her job to be suspicious, and to tell off private detectives who make a nuisance of themselves and nearly tangle up her investigation. ;D
You'll learn more about Leila in the epilogue, but for a given value of Okay, Leila will be all right. :D
Grey getting arrested is going to be the highlight of everyone's Tuesday, I think. Knowing him, he managed to add verbally abusing the police and obstructing justice to his charge list.
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Gotta say, the next chapter of 'Shifting Colours' is not being written easily.
Are A and L ever going to find out who/what Grey really is?
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It's that time of year, unfortunately. I was hoping to get the Epilogue out by Tuesday, but finals want to kill me, so I feel your pain. Plus, the epilogue covers a lot of crap - I'm going to have to put Grey's position in my worldbuilding in there, because there was too much information for any other place. (And it's really awkward, because I need to explain some things that both of them should know about already...)
My only hint is that there are no creatures in my universe, just people. What he's doing is magic, for a given value of magic, but he doesn't control it.
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I hope Grey's super ego is making him shake with such great anger that he will be tortured by it. :P Either that or he feels genuinely remorseful and apologises to his victims, but that doesn't seem very possible, haha.
What about his aura that is eating up all the other women's? :X He didn't need to be near them to inflict some form of suffering on them, so how are they going to get rid of those nasty tentacles?
I'm not too worried about Lindsay and Allie, actually. They can always disappear for a while if they need to! ;)
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You'll figure out what happens to Grey as soon as I get away from these final projects and take-home finals. And all about his aura.
Too true: Allie and Lindsay can hop the next train out of dodge if they have to. :D
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