fic: combinations [so far gone]

[screamlet]

So Far Gone (47974 words) by

Comments

[shagungu]

Wow. You broke my heart in the last chapter, when Jim told Leonard that he had to go be with Spock. I would never have guessed that you would get them all together 2 years later. Or that it would be Leonard and Spock who first really fell in love with each other and went deep. I got worried in the middle that poor Jim would never be able to get there himself, but they all do, in their own broken ways.

This is definitely going on my list of favorite K/S/Mc fics, and I am sure I will reread it a number of times in the future.

[screamlet]

Agh, sorry this is so late! Yeah, it was never supposed to be as easy as one pairing or another winning out -- the fluidity of them all is what keeps me writing in the series, so, haha, here it is. I'm glad it worked for you.

[illariy]

Ooooh. This is hot and beautiful and intense in all the best ways. Thank you so much for sharing. ♥

[screamlet]

Thanks for reading, and sorry this is so late!

[joeannk]

Oh my, this was terrific. I wish I were more articulate today I I could let you know in detail everything I loved especially loved about this fic and your take on the threesome. Suffice it to say, I wish this threesome were the standard in Trek fic because at the end of the day no matter how in love any two of them are, they're just not complete without the third. At least not to my mind. Gold star for you, screamlet.

[screamlet]

Thank you, and sorry this is so late!

[the_archandroid]

oh my god thank you so much for this...i can't thank you enough for this fic, for the three of them together and in love, and sort of each broken in their own special ways but coalescing into something really really wonderful here! This was beautifully written and there is something so REAL about this, especially Kirk, his characterization and his attitude are so in line with what I'd expect given Pine!Kirk's history. And of course the interplay between spock and mccoy is just gold, i mean it's just exactly what i think of when I think of the two of them, this intensity and gentleness and affection and this little thread of awkwardness that is so right. And I was so so moved by that final scene after the toxic atmosphere planet, where we see a little crack in Jim...where we see just how deeply he cares and needs...
man...I know this is incoherent...but i just love this... i really really love this.

[screamlet]

Aw, thank you so much! Sorry this is so late!

[puckling]

Wow, I really liked the character dynamics in all this. It's so interesting and such a unique view of Jim, Bones, and Spock.

[screamlet]

Aaaaah thanks so much!