Bloody Things, PG-13, Sam, Dean

Jun 21, 2011 19:20

Title: Bloody Things
Author: scourgeofeurope 
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Genre: Gen, h/c
Word Count: 1,274
Warnings/Spoilers: Meh. Series as a whole.
Timeline: Post-s6
Summary: Sam and Sam's head and Dean.

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Bloody Things )

one-shot

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randomstasis June 23 2011, 01:31:17 UTC
Lovely how the story sneaks through Sam's confusion and Dean's freakout-
“You talk to me like I’m five.”
Dean’s voice was like one of his smiles."

Aww. He thinks like he's five too- plus about a thousand, (both of them, poor guys, should definitely have a doctor with wizard hands to believe in!)

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fifimom June 23 2011, 11:53:47 UTC
Wonderfully written. My favorite line “Whatever. I want to believe in an awesome doctor with hands like a wizard who cleans up our messes.”

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icanhazpie June 23 2011, 18:22:28 UTC
I applaud you for taking on Sam after the wall comes down. Not exactly easy subject matter, but you did it justice.

Sometimes he forgot how big he was even though he’d been this big for an extremely long time. Longer than the lives of a hundred men, but there was a time when he was very small and still the exact same size. A time and place where everything burned, where skin hung from flesh and flesh from bone and Sam screamed a lot, screamed pleas and curses and threats that did no good, but it was okay. Everything was okay, because they always spoke to Sam in a way even more demeaning than they used to speak to Dean, they assured him. Dean was a kiddo and a sport. Sam was a darling little boy.

“I want to go home,” Sam said, then. And now.

I loved that whooooole part.

I want to wash my hands,” he said now. “They have your spit on them and I feel violated.”

*sporfle*

It's delicate and disassociated and lovely. Fantastic job.

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sailorstarshine June 23 2011, 19:17:36 UTC
This made me grin. No matter how messed up Dean will still be there for Sam, and vice versa. :3

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amonitrate June 24 2011, 01:07:34 UTC
lovely little piece of characterization. I especially liked this:

“I didn’t ask if you were fine. I told you to change.”

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