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lurelei September 23 2013, 15:33:05 UTC
“Well - Aurora - I saw her vivid, full of life but sometimes she was also very introverted, her eyes searching the horizon. Maybe she was a creature from another time [...] "

I share Luke's fascination. But I'm happy he stopped spiraling down, even though that implies he was not there for Aurora and little Sun. Well, at least he's here for Ravi now. And Reid - let's not forget Reid :D

I'm still pondering over Liath Orbanns. Hmmm. *strokes chin*

And oh, oh, I love attacks of recognition ;)

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scotianova September 25 2013, 13:02:54 UTC
Hmmm. *strokes chin*

melting here - again!

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fremi08 September 23 2013, 15:33:37 UTC
Oh, there is progress here! Luke finally gets to know some things about Reid. Although Reid doesn't really answer his question about his and Katie's relationship. And Liath is creeping me out a little...

Another awesome update!

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scotianova September 25 2013, 13:04:36 UTC
Hmm Liath...
he isn't a bad man but maybe he is misinterpreting the role he has in Reid's life.

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kccalgal September 25 2013, 00:00:02 UTC
You give these characters so much depth its amazing. They certainly are enjoying their talk despite Laith's attempts to thwart it. In this chapter we learn so much about both yet still know so little. Reid is especially good about stating truth without giving up the truth.

“You and Katie - for how long have you been together now?”

There was one of those moments when Reid didn’t answer first but just looked him straight in the eye before he smirked and answered:

“Well as everything - that’s open to interpretation, or maybe you could call it a matter of definition. In some way Katie and I are together since I was four and she was two years old. But our relationship defies usual standards of categorizing.”

Well done my dear. I'm looking forward to more.

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scotianova September 25 2013, 13:06:23 UTC
I am brooding over chapter 13 - there are always times in the process when I seem incapable of getting anything done.

Thank you!!!

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bubbafrogz September 30 2013, 01:08:44 UTC
Liath may have got to talk to Reid but Reid still asked Luke to stay!! What a great take Luke has on Ravi and Reid's relationship. Curious what the family business is or was. Good info on Reid. "He had learned the hard way that loving someone includes loving yourself too." Love that!! "Just being his unique Reid-self he’d never been a good pretender." So glad. Ahh common ground.

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