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The Spot (Part 6) - Mischief on the Mind - FFF 5-24-2013

May 26, 2013 16:33

Title: The Spot (Part 6) - Mischief on the Mind
Written by: scotianova
Rating: pg
Summary: There are still things to be spoken out loud.
Prompt: Fun Fic Friday prompt of Mischief of the Mind
Disclaimer: There is only one purpose I write them for: FUN
AN: Sequel to The Spot storyline.

Mischief on the Mind

“What can I do, Reid?”

You ask, softly ( Read more... )

scotianova, sobriety, fun fic friday

Comments 8

sleeper6 May 26 2013, 15:11:31 UTC

Awww, another lovely entry! I'm glad they're still talking about things, though. They both hurt deeply, Reid moreso of course, so it's not something they can just forget so quickly. Very realistic and emotional! Wonderful!

shadownyc May 26 2013, 17:00:56 UTC

Brilliant chapter! It's so perfect having the two of them talk together and truly open up in such a perfect way!!!

sajaal May 27 2013, 01:46:51 UTC

I can't imagine how difficult this type of conversation could be...why did you like him? He's hairy and not at all like me...but that's not quite true...beauty is in the eye of the beholder and is really only skin deep. Luke has this thing about minds and artistry which as he says is why he fell for Reid...such a difficult conversation that was left on such a light hearted note...

“You’re an ass, you know?”

“I know. But it’s a nice ass that’s made for your most delicate part to fit in.”

Lovely Ph, just lovely:-))

amyafa May 27 2013, 10:36:20 UTC

So glad they are still talking about what happend instead of pretending that all is well just like that.

But I am verry glad that Reid is being snarky and has got his appetite back again.

Babysteps.

I hope they can be as happy as they once where.
It will take a lot of time and effort.

Thank you for this great chapter.

kccalgal May 28 2013, 04:17:55 UTC

I echo the above comments. Its good that they have reconnected enough that they can talk more about what happened and how things started to go wrong. Just as important they seem to know when enough has been said for the time being and drop the issue for one that is more light hearted.

you can handle offensive, unfair and cranky Reid, but sad and hurt Reid, especially when it’s you who put him there, scares the shit out of you.

That pretty much says it all. Nice chapter.