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Gunshots like Lullabies

Nov 07, 2009 03:47

Who: Naruto Uzumaki (couragetodare) and Scar (lonestray)
When: November 3rd-ish. After this.
Where: City outskirts, near the ruins.
Format: Paragraph, present tense.
What: Scar, Naruto, the inability to move on and the urge to look back.
Warnings: I have no idea. Some blood?

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-incomplete, naruto uzumaki, scar

Comments 3

(I hope you don't mind if I use past tense. :3) lonestray November 7 2009, 05:26:07 UTC

He didn't need any help. He didn't want any help. He didn't trust any help ( ... )

(I don't mind at all! Is this okay then? :uses past tense too: XD) couragetodare November 7 2009, 15:16:42 UTC

Injured was the thought that stuck in Naruto's head as the man on the ground raised one hand in recognition. How injured though, Naruto had no way of knowing. Nor was he sure how he could find out.

Naruto had purposefully skirted around the topic of Scar's wounds while talking to him over the network. He had seen his some of the man's conversation with his teammate, so he had understood quickly enough that asking him if he was injured, asking him if he wanted help, was the wrong route to take. Scar's reaction to Sakura's offer of assistance reminded him too much of someone else he knew, and so Naruto's approach was the same as it would have been for that person ( ... )

Over a month laaaaate. ;; lonestray December 23 2009, 06:59:40 UTC

[ooc: Okay, so. I'm sorryyyyy this is so late! And with almost two months of Scar character development I'm trying to get back into his just-arrived mindset. xD; Don't wanna drop this log, but we should do an updated one soon too! He'll be a little bit less grumpy at him too. xD]"Just...bleeding? On your own, without being cut ( ... )