no small wonder - pt.2

[scorch66]

Comments

[omnomthing]

I posted a comment on DoA but who cares, it's Sara!fic and is great even a second time around. <3

There's just one thing. This part:

"I think we're having a moment, Uepi," Taguchi happily explains and Kame feels more than sees Koki's hand move to swat him upside the head."

I think I'm missing the reference here. D: Mind enlightening me?

[scorch66]

It's a SaraSaya hybrid which makes it significantly better ;D

Ah, that part had no canon reference asides from KT's teasing silence and abuse when Junno goes all woobie on them *rolls* they're all such tsunderes

♥♥

[omnomthing]

Doh. Fail comment. >.< But the two of you really did a brilliant job. You guys make a good team! <3

Ahh, ok. :D The italics made me think it was a reference or something. Seriously, sometimes I want to be like, "Guuuuuuuuuuuuuys, stop picking on Junno!" *snugglesquash Junno* =^.^=

This fic makes me happeh! Member-ai is good for the soul. :D

[ariancho]

i love this!!♥♥♥

could feel all the love from the members.. :)
This is what they call Member-ai ♥♥

everything's perfect ! :))
so much love and cuteness and all. :))
ahh! feel like playing CHAIN on loop right now. haha

uwaaa~ I want to have a pocket sized Kame too! hahaha xD
totally love this so much ! :)

thanks for sharing !

[scorch66]

ahh! feel like playing CHAIN on loop right now. haha
even though the lyrics of Gold inspired this fic, CHAIN is so appropriate ;A; ♥

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment! :'D

[sashjun]

I've finished this some times ago, but I suck so commenting only now.

I really really loved it. I'm pretty sure I laughed out loud in a tram when I read the first portion of this and then I loved it all. All the ways they care of him, how Nakamaru indulges Kame, how Koki is so in sync with him somehow &hearts, all the easiness in the air when Junno is involved and the glorious mean mind of ueda who at the end knows just how Kame might feel (even if he loses him and doesn't notice lol)-

I'm really sorry it's no quotes and just a summary, ugh ;___; but really, I really really loved this to the end and the moment Kame turns back (after actually resuming activities as tiny, omg) and just so perfect (and funny). Also I loved all the ways they deal with the little Kame, like all the size comparisons and "quick solutions" and such. I mean. Sauna <3

Uhm I will stop now. Just I really loved this!

[scorch66]

I'm really sorry it's no quotes and just a summary, ugh
fjdskfhjksd you are precious ♥~♥ /wibbles at. We're thrilled that you enjoyed this fic enough to take the time to leave us such thorough feedback - summaries are much loved too because it's interesting to see how effectively the story was conveyed and what stood out most to the reader; an invaluable comment, really. Thank you so much ♥! and an extra ♥ since this fic wouldn't exist if you hadn't run DoA so fabulously ;D

[crazgal5]

Loved it so much!!!

Have to say I teared up at more than one part ^___^

And I absolutely LOVE the ending~~~~ XD

<3

[scorch66]

Wow, tears? *__* that will make my writing partner, Saya The Angst Queen, very pleased since this fic was way more fluffy than what she usually writes. Thank you! We're gald you enjoyed the read. ♥

[kt_kitt]

OMG!!! I just read this and I laughed and enjoyed it too much!!!

Thanks again!
U always write so nice ficus ;_;
*off to read ur other ak one XDDDD*

Thankssssssssssss

[scorch66]

*glomps* It's makes me happiest when my fics make readers laugh ♥!

Saya and I are very glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you :'D