Between Man and God (4/?)

[scilera]

Title: Between Man and God
Characters: Ten, later Ten/Rose
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angst (I love how this will surprise no one) and Fluff *watches people die of shock* and existentialism of potted plants.
Spoilers: Through JE and then spoilers for other stories of mine, but nothing major there.
Word Count: 3176
Summary: Because that's what she does, my

Comments

[danu_mactire]

Bring on the confusion! I kinda like trying to figure things out on my own. And I'm probably wrong about this but would this time lady happen to be Jenny? or am I completely off the mark?

[scilera]

*grins!*

Now, now, if I told you just who she was, it'd spoil things, now wouldn't it? ;) Nice guess, though! I love seeing my readers puzzle through things. Makes me feel a little bit like a proud parent!

Yes, I am aware that's weird. ;)

Thanks for the review!

[starmalachite]

Ooooh, very intriguing! I just found this story and am enjoying it greatly. You tantalize, but are so clearly in control of the bigger picture that it's easy to relax & enjoy the ride.

Which is why I vote for finishing this segment of the larger story before starting another one. That should ultimately be less confusing, even if enlightenment is initially delayed.

[scilera]

I do actually have all of this planned out and it will make sense in the end, promise! ;) I think I will finish this particular storyline first, then bring BWR over and finish it. That will clear up some things.

I'm very glad that you're enjoying this so much. I myself vastly prefer complicated storylines, but this takes the cake--even for me. With that in mind, I'm beyond thrilled to see other people getting into this. Thank you!

[theoneeyedwitch]

I have absolutely no idea what is going on.

But I'm still reading... Congratulations ; )

[scilera]

*bows down*

I commend you then, for persisting! I hope things start to become clearer for you soon!

[kneazle]

Ok... headaches abound!

So... he fell through the crack in the void, the TARDIS died, and now he's in a parallel universe with a parallel Rose or OUR Rose who still has bits of the time vortex in her?

Although, this is implying that this is TenII and that Rose actually went off with Ten/Time Lord and now it's TenII who was left behind to muddle his way through Pete's World's universe...

Or... Or... my head hurts, so I'm stopping until the next chapter. :P

[scilera]

*cuddles you and offers aspirin*

Without revealing the storyline, I can offer you one hint that may help clear your aching head. The Doctor himself said that 'things don't always happen to me in the proper order'. We saw evidence of that with River and Sally Sparrow. This entire universe is based on twisted, interwoven timelines, so when things start to lose sense, repeat that quote to yourself and it'll help.

I hope. ;)

Thank you for the review!

[kneazle]

Hmm... now I'll probably have to reread things to understand it... :P

This is a bit Holmesian!! Bravo. I can do well with mystery movies but not mystery books... so let's see what I can figure out, shall we? (that's the absolute compliment, as I am so so confused)

As for the aspirin -- I really ought to take some because I do have a headache -- but not from your story! ;) Paint fumes and nerves!

[scilera]

Really? Wow, that is a compliment! And yeah, a second readthrough might not be such a bad plan. I can't tell you the amount of times I read over plotty fic to make sure I've picked up everything I can. ;)

[helygen]

Oooh more mystery! I love this - the hints and the intrigue keep me reading, and your 'Doctor voice' is perfect even if he doesn't recognise himself ;)

[scilera]

*beams* Would it be weird to admit that as I type, I hear him saying the line I'm writing?

I'm excited to hear you're enjoying yourself! Next part is coming tomorrow night. Saturday morning at latest!