One Moment (Ryouga/Yukito. Abaranger)

[scifisentai]

Title: One Moment
Pairing: Ryouga/Yukito
Fandom: Abaranger
Rating: PG
AN: A uss_skyisland story.

Comments

[megthelegend]

Oh, I love this. Perfect way for Ryouga to find out what happened. :( Really lovely how they acknowledge Asuka's importance, but it doesn't take away from the importance of the burgeoning relationship with Ryouga and Mai.

(Man, I gotta repost the ones I've done already to the community, sigh)

[scifisentai]

Thanks. :) It was something I wanted to address before but could never work out how. :(

(And that reminds me that I don't think I posted this one over there. *facepalms*)

[megthelegend]

This is perfect, and I also love how you really subtly address that Ryouga's physically intruding on Yukito's memory as well as physically intruding on him in the holodeck AND emotionally intruding on the memory because Yukito then has to tell him about it. I love how that's unspoken and so subtle, lady. :)

[serpentine85]

A lovely, sensitive piece. I like how you've crafted the atmosphere in this one; especially the last snap-shot of them on the beach - the image shows so much more of the complexity of their new relationship than words can. Love it :)

[scifisentai]

Thank you. :) I'm sure I've said this before, but I wasn't sure it would turn out as well as I wanted it to, so I'm glad you liked it. :)