Precautions (Ryouga/Yukito. Abaranger)

Feb 05, 2009 15:27

Title: Precautions
Pairing: Ryouga/Yukito technically, but it's not really the point
Fandom: Abaranger
Rating: PG
Episodes referenced: #30 and 31
AN: Originally written for toku100 but it went over the word limit. :(

Precautions )

pairing: ryouga/yukito, fandom: abaranger, challenge: 30_kisses

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megthelegend February 6 2009, 00:01:51 UTC
Oh, EEK.

::shudders::

This is exactly right and awful; I love how much unspoken stuff you hint at here. Ryouga's utter horror at actually planning for the day when he'll die, Yukito's steely grimness in giving him the idea but not wanting to do it, and gah.

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scifisentai February 6 2009, 10:08:57 UTC
I know! It's kind of depressing, huh? :( But I think it works for this season whereas it wouldn't necessarily for others, because they don't have any dependents to worry about.

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megthelegend February 7 2009, 03:18:00 UTC
It is extremely depressing! Yes, absolutely; it IS something that they should be thinking about. Because in this season the stakes are higher if Red doesn't come back. :(

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scifisentai February 7 2009, 10:42:50 UTC
Even though Red always comes back. ;) But yeah, I think just in general it's something they'd worry about because *they* wouldn't know that Reds always survive. ;)

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serpentine85 February 9 2009, 13:58:06 UTC
This is really good. I like your premise here and how well you've illustrated the concern and vulnerability that Ryouga must be feeling. It brings the responsibility they carry and the dangers they face to a very personal level and I love that you've obviously put a lot of thought into this piece - it shows through clearly in the writing.
I'm not especially familiar with this series, so it threw me a little to see Kai in this. Have I missed something/someone?

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scifisentai February 9 2009, 20:51:48 UTC
Thank you. :) It's a concept they touched on over the season, so this is just taking it a bit further and I'm glad it works.

And no, that's a typo I missed. *facepalms* It's supposed to be Mai, not Kai. It's fixed now, though.

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