Four Nights - Pt. 4: Evergreen

[schwarzfluegel]

Title: Four Nights
Fandom: Gackt, Hyde
Genre: AU, Boys Love, Romance
Pairing: GakuHai
Rating: NC-17
Language: English
Summary:Gackt gets dumped by his girlfriend and wants to drown himself in alcohol to finally forget her. But before he can do so, he meets Hyde who works as a singer and entertains the costumers of a bar. They 'decide' to become

Comments

[kairi_yume]

I'm just going to put in parts of the fic since I can't write good comments in general. And even more so with my nose bleeding from the NC-17 action XD *lamez*

“Gaku! Please, just leave him alone when he doesn't want to talk to you, okay?” he asked, “he looked very bad.”
Aww poor Hyde ;_;
Hurry and tell Gackt these things instead of acting all suspicious and vague, You >.<

“No, you don't. I … we … we slept … together.”
“...” I swallowed. He was right, I didn't know this.
“When …?” I asked a little, hawing. Though I already knew the answer.
“The … the night we first met.” he replied ruefully.
Eh? EH?! So they did sleep together that time?? *jaw drops*

“Sleep with me!” What?! I had seen this coming. And it seemed as if Hyde hadn't as well.
Good job, Hyde! *thumbs up*

Blow? My gaze wandered down to his crotch. Blow? … Oh my god, no, I couldn't do that - really not that.
“Haido, you-”
“Not there,” he answered quicklyThis was amusing XD Gackt being nervous was cute too

[schwarzfluegel]

Hrhrhr~ thanks fpr reading, I'm glad you liked it x3

And jup, they slept together ^^ Gackt just doesn't remember anymore, since he was too drunk back then. Seems as if I surprised you with this fact x3

And I see a bad typo in the lines you quoted °° *hurries to correct it*

[kairi_yume]

I remember you telling me nothing happened O.O Now this. Oho~

[schwarzfluegel]

I didn't tell you nothing happend - I told you Hyde wouldn't take advantage of Gackt's sadness :3 He slept with Gackt to comfort him.

[annui]

U make me blush for the sex education Hyde gave to Gackt >///< I guess that's because usually I read they already know how to that :D

I'm glad G could find Hyde, now it's time to figure out how his feeling is. Can't wait!
Btw, this story nearing it's end already? :(

[schwarzfluegel]

Hrhr~ writing/ translating the sex education made made me wailing and headdesk-ing quite a lot xD And well, Hyde does know how to have sex with a guy x3~~~

Thanks for reading; I'm glad you liked it :3
And jup, only the epilogue's left.

[annui]

Eh?? Why? They're good written n in this fic it was different, like I said, this was my 1st time reading how hyde gave gackt instruction for having sex with him. That was superb n amusing! 8D

Aww...end already? And this chapter's ending was killing meeh! XDD

[schwarzfluegel]

Thanks again x3
Ah well, writing smut in German is not a big thing to me, since it's my mother tongue. But translating it and needing to look up LOTS of words was quite hard. And it's pretty graphic imho ^^'

Jep, (to quote Nelly Furtado) "all good things come to an end". Actually I had planned this fic as a long one shot with a quite different and sadder story.

[a_deux_vitesses]

I'm glad You told Gackt where to find Hyde. Though the scene where Gackt walked into Black Rose was so sad, poor Hyde was crying so hard he couldn't even finish his song ;_;

What? They actually had slept together that first night? :o

I really liked the ending part, cluless!Gackt was very cute and I loved the smut too~ I find the last line a bit bittersweet though, Gackt didn't really say "I love you", but I liked it anyway ^^

[schwarzfluegel]

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it :3
And I surprised another one, shaaa~ x3

Gackt and Shizuka broke up only some weeks ago and he just realized that he indeed has feelings for Hyde after all. So, I thought it was more realistic to not let him say 'I love you' already :3