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liquid_courage in schreiben_atmen

Anniversary

Sep 03, 2012 22:11

Title: Anniversary
Rating: PG
Characters: Harvey/Donna (Suits)
Summary: She thinks about crying, but starts to laugh instead, looking over at Mike. "Harvey always was terrible with dates."
Author's Note: I haven't written any fic in ages, and I've certainly never written anything from Suits, so we'll see how this goes.

( Anniversary )

one-shot: anniversary, show: suits

Comments 8

abvj September 4 2012, 02:32:17 UTC

UGH. WAY TO KILL ME DEAD. I loved all the details you gave them, like their small wedding and that moment in McDonalds and their vows, and then you did that at the end, and that was just so mean! But still. Really well done.

And now I am going to be obnoxious and tell you that the 1000 words you write tomorrow should be about these two as well. K? Thanks.

liquid_courage September 4 2012, 02:46:35 UTC

Thank you! I was pretty nervous about it, but I'm so glad you liked it.

I had a lot of fun writing this, so we'll see. I can't write their banter like other people (*ahem* you *ahem*) can, but I might give it a shot.

just_liv September 4 2012, 04:08:57 UTC

This is an attempt of murder that's what this is! It starts all so fluffy and then:BAM a brick with "angst" on its nametag just hits you in the face.

And it hurts!!

Well done! That was actually very good. I can always appreciate the twist of a good 'n' old angst. But still, ouch.

lapiccolina September 4 2012, 04:52:41 UTC

Wow. This is soooo sad. You had to kill him at 60?!? Poor Donna.

The details of the wedding were awesome, I love that they chose to eat at McDonalds after the reception, and that it appears they at least had a long and happy marriage.

Great stuff!

phrenitis September 4 2012, 06:28:22 UTC

Angst!! I love the pain so. :)

I really enjoyed your tone here - the blend of sweet and sorrow, past and present. Great job! My favorite line:

Everyone in the room laughed, because they knew him, but she laughed because she knew him better than anyone, and she knew that he hadn't looked at another woman in years."

So simple, but it holds such meaning. Wonderful!

psychicnagger September 4 2012, 09:38:38 UTC

*must not cry at work* *must not cry at work*

Oh god.

*clings to them*

This was beautifully written, but oh Harvey. You can't just up and die on us her.

Please write more? :)