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Silence and Communion

Apr 30, 2007 14:20

Title: Silence and Communion
Wordcount: 2271
Fandom: Stargate-SG1
Spoilers: "The Fifth Race"
By: Blackbird Song
Category: Gen, mostly teamy goodness (Though if you look very close, it could be read as pre-slash, if you really, really want...)
Rating/Warning: G
Prompt: "-not needing to talk, but needing to find something to do with one's hands. ( ( Read more... )

Comments 5

green_grrl April 30 2007, 20:19:39 UTC

It's nice to see the team taking care of Jack. Great Teal'c thoughts, rooted in his Jaffa-ness. And, aw, the sacrifices Daniel will make because he's so happy to see Jack back. :-)

And I love the little annoyances getting passed around the backrub circle as too-hard massages! Hee!

blackbird_song May 1 2007, 04:11:33 UTC

Thank you do much for reading and commenting on this story! It's my first foray into SG-1 writing, and next time, I'm going to use a beta. *facepalm*

I'm very glad that Teal'c worked for you. I'm really a Jack/Daniel person, but have wanted to write Teal'c for quite a while, as he's such a fascinating character. (And Christopher Judge is both hilarious and GORGEOUS!)

I must admit that I quite liked the way those irritations were passed from one set of shoulders to the next, as well. I really love the way that team bickers and shares, both via word and gesture. ;)

Catherine

xylohypha May 1 2007, 00:20:42 UTC

Awww. Loved the way Teal'c and Jack kind of reversed roles at the beginning. And teamy goodness is always nice--especially when it includes a little shoulder-rubbing!

blackbird_song May 1 2007, 04:24:05 UTC

Nothing, in my humble opinion, is as schmoopy as a shoulder rub!

It's very interesting that you should note the role reversal of Jack and Teal'c. I had not thought consciously of that when I wrote the piece, but certainly that episode put Jack in a position in which he was not in command in a recognizable way. One of the things I like best about this team, though, is that they know each other's strengths, and (mostly) when to defer to or take charge of another member, regardless of rank. The makers of this series created such a lovely dynamic between these characters; a perfect canvas for fanfiction! ;D

Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this!

Catherine

kwhiteshark May 31 2007, 19:42:12 UTC

I've just recently gotten hooked on SG-1, so I'm not up to speed on all the seasons, but I wanted to say that I enjoyed this. Great job! :-D